Thanks for the actually constructive criticism. But I've got a question:
I'll get a couple of the sections cleaned up, and probably change the width of some of the breaks. That really depends on what I do with the font however. Ya see, I used that font because it's the official Watchmen font. (Future Bold Condensed or something, I don't feel like checking at the moment, lol) I wanted to keep the whole thing watchmen themed, so I used it. I just need to find a good looking way to add some breaks so that holes can remain, but it will still look consistent, and like the Watchmen font. Any ideas for that?