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Three friends in the wastes chapter 1

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I can't think of a better title for now.
This isn't a serious fic but it's starting to turn into one XD And if somethings don't make sense, like how they all ended up together, I have a lot I plan on explaining later on.

:iconcoltizajayo: as Melody

:iconsubjectsigma77: as Sigma

:icondamperthedizzy: as Ten'
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I like how you started out the story with all the action, hopefully you'll give us more insight on the characters in the future! :D
All in all looking forward to the next chapter :icondashsaluteplz:
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I will, don't worry XD and thanks! :D
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NOMforcupcakesHobbyist General Artist
Really liked it bro decided to read it since you told me about it and I like!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you think so, I'm working on chapter two ^^
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NOMforcupcakesHobbyist General Artist
sweet lawls im working on revisions to wake txt me ill send you a pic
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zzzzzzzzz23Student Artist
is this your first fanfic? i found a few mistakes while reading, but if you dont want to hear it, its okay. :)
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It's not near my first but it's only the second I posted XD Go ahead and point out the mistakes, I'd appriciate if you showed me what I need to fix
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zzzzzzzzz23Student Artist
okay so you did this right. "Stable 29 jump suit" But you also said "10 seconds" which is wrong. You say it this way, "ten seconds." If its a name its okay, if its not, its not.

Did i help? :)
SubjectSigma77's avatar
Opps I should have known that X) Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't even notice
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zzzzzzzzz23Student Artist
its all right :)
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damperthedizzyHobbyist Traditional Artist
This was an interesting read, bro! I like how I am all mysterious :3
I can't wait for Chapter 2! also, a little thing about Ten', when he gets used to some ponies, he relaxes around them and can be goofy :3.
I CAN NOT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2!
SubjectSigma77's avatar
Oh so you got this tough shell of stoic mysteriousness but once you break that, he ends up like the others?
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damperthedizzyHobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, he can't be like the others, they are happy, as far as I know, but you know, he sometimes acts stupid, like after some drinks or is just bored.
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So not full on randomness like me or playfully naive like Melody?
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damperthedizzyHobbyist Traditional Artist
sometimes full on randomness, depends on his mood and the situation, when they are safe, can be relaxed to some extent, but that extent is extended with a few drinks.
SubjectSigma77's avatar
I like the way you worded that
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damperthedizzyHobbyist Traditional Artist
me too... anyways, do ya understand me?
SubjectSigma77's avatar
Yeah I get it. He can do goofy things but only on occasion and he's more likely to do it when drunk and having a good time X3
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ooh, exciting! and I agree with Leather-Duster XD
SubjectSigma77's avatar
Thanks! :D About the backrounds? I just put some stuff on my responce to him if you wanna check it out, but it's hardly anything. Most of each of their pasts will be explained as the story goes on
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ok! can't wait~
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Oh now, any background you can give me on these ponies?
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Opps, I guess my response didn't send last night. Anyway, there's a lot that will be explained as the story goes on but I can tell you that Mel is from Stable 27, Sigma has been part of a tribe based on the Boomers all his life, and there is a lot to tell about Ten' but that'll be part of the story later. Not much info I know but more will be told later in the story. Thanks for reading it :3
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I could tell you about Mel if you want!
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