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Caine at the beach
Time to put Caine in the Gallery I think! Let more people see it and comment.
Criticisms are appreciated, providing they are constructive. Myself, I feel that Caines right shoulder is out of place, his hair needs fixing up, to be more like thick bangs, rather than chunky strands and the towel and speedos need slight tweaking. Any other points people?
Original character created by Kellie Barrie
Fanart by Struck3xbylightning
Colored by Blackrose
Criticisms are appreciated, providing they are constructive. Myself, I feel that Caines right shoulder is out of place, his hair needs fixing up, to be more like thick bangs, rather than chunky strands and the towel and speedos need slight tweaking. Any other points people?
Original character created by Kellie Barrie
Fanart by Struck3xbylightning
Colored by Blackrose
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© 2005 - 2021 struck3Xbylightning
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Not bad, the body is probably the most accurate part, and that's not always easy to do 
I see your'e going for the semi-realism style here, where it looks manga-like but still realistically-proportioned, so if that's the desired goal then I think the eyes could be a bit smaller/thinner since they're still a little large like standard manga-eyes, on the other extreme - manga tends to give characters small and "cute" mouth's/noses, so each of those need to be a little bigger for more realistic proportions 
It wasn't until I was already halfway through typing that I realised how old this was though, so you probably have figured this out already
I see your'e going for the semi-realism style here, where it looks manga-like but still realistically-proportioned, so if that's the desired goal then I think the eyes could be a bit smaller/thinner since they're still a little large like standard manga-eyes, on the other extreme - manga tends to give characters small and "cute" mouth's/noses, so each of those need to be a little bigger for more realistic proportions It wasn't until I was already halfway through typing that I realised how old this was though, so you probably have figured this out already
Thankyou for leaving me a comment and critique though! Although this pic is old, any critique on any of my works is always appreciated. I learn from commentary more so than practice, as my own mind and eye see it as correct even if it truly is not.
To have an established and confident artist such as yourself comment on my work gives me great pleasure, as I know I have an experienced eye to give me the information I need to better my art!
To have an established and confident artist such as yourself comment on my work gives me great pleasure, as I know I have an experienced eye to give me the information I need to better my art!
Your comments are right. I like the way you have rendered the torso.
Interesting... Not to my interest... but interesting nonetheless. XD
Beautiful, Struck! I love it! Well drawn and sexy indeed. And Caine rocks!
~Sara
~Sara
Yaaay! Caine on ze beach... more importantly pant- and shirtless 
there will be more soon BuddhaTheGod! much more! just keep a watch out ok!?
Okay ^^
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