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R2 - OIT-246 + OIT-082 by StringlessKite R2 - OIT-246 + OIT-082 by StringlessKite
Music (battle theme? XP): [link]

Well then, this is absolutely bad, designing the picture and thinking of a strategy was fun, but drawing... yeah well. Not pleased.

The technical part:

BFOI Round 2 ([link])
Michelle, Rhomulus the Houndour ([link]), Darryl and Luxray ([link]) belong to: [link]

Patti ([link]) and Apario the Blaziken belong to [link]

Ascot and Freesia the Raichu ([link]) belong to me.

The fun part:

- Howdy partner! - the girl that said this to me looked relaxed and confident. Her name was Patti and for some reason she reminded me of myself.
- Hi! - I replied and we went straight to the point. All of her pokemon were ready to battle. I intended to choose Lotus or Lily for that battle, but Freesia left her pokeball full of pep.
- Rai rai, chuu! <I'm going to kick their butts!> - Patti stopped me when I tried to make Freesia behave. It turned out that her Blaziken would be a perfect match for a naughty pokemon like my Raichu.
-You are right! - I was pleased with the idea. Both pokemon had colours of a figy berry and they looked cool. We didn't really work on any strategy after we choose the team. What for? The Leaders were already waiting for us anyways.

- Rhomulus! Luxray! - that couple was really a perfect match. They even grinned at the same time when they saw our Pokemon.
- Your strategy is so obvious - Darryl pointed at us and startled me. Patti looked confused as well. - Weaker Raichu will hide behind Blaziken to fire long-ranged attacks at us! Such a basic idea could never work against...
*WHAM*
Freesia pulled Houdour's leg with her tail and made it fall on it's face.
- Raichu, chu chu raaai! <I have no idea what that moron is talking about, but you are my opponent!> - rather composed and cute-looking puppy began the battle. Darryl experienced a major jaw break. That was a sad view.
I decided to move around the field to always have an eye on Freesia, since Luxray and Apario were using so much space for their battle. I realised I'm happy being perpendicular to Raichu's attacks and more importantly... Patti did the same thing. We exchanged looks as we passed each other to have better view... We had a perfect control of the battlefield, while the Leaders were more concentrated on 1 on 1 battles!


- Apario, Blaze Kick!! - shouted Patti, when Houndour was about to use another Fire Blast on Raichu. I understood her intentions perfectly...
- Freesia, Magnet Rise! Fly up!! - With it's target gone, Rhomulus fired Fire Blast at where Freesia USED to be... which happened to be the spot into which Luxray came flying after Blaze Kick.
- Rhomulus NOOO! - Michelle was too late with her command tho. Luxray fainted from all the damage taken. Which left Raichu and Blaziken fighting against Houndour...


*A few minutes of merciless @ss-whooping later...*
- PATTI AND ASCOT WON, THANKS TO THEIR BRILLIANT STRATEGY! - a voice from the speakers announced the result of the match. I was happy. So was Patti. She gave me a hug and we celebrated our victory eating Figy berries with our pokemon.
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HatterTricks Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MY SCRIBBLES WILL BE UP SOON DEAR! ;U;

eeeeeeeee Patti and ApariooooooooooOOoOOOOoOOoo<3

/hugs you all over the place
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StringlessKite Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you like it, but I'm quite honest you will do a better job on that one. Can't wait to see it! <3
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ReverseSwirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm loving the perspective in this picture! 8D And it's always fun to see a fellow marker user ;P
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StringlessKite Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha I wanna switch from markers to watercolours but it's not my level yet ^^" Glad you like it!
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ReverseSwirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, wow, watercolors! I suck at them, but they do look so pretty <3 And no problem!
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Wild-Baguette Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
oh wanted to add you drew Luxray just perfectly <3 love the speed and angle of him <3
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Wild-Baguette Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
I love the idea and the effort!

If you don't mind I'd like to point out how you could make it better.

You drew Darryl and Michelle in the right angle.. they are tilted like the road. but the trainers and pokemons aren't tilted.. they seem to be pretty much lying on their sides on the ground instead of stnding on it. You could of drawn them the same angle like Michy and Darry. Also the bluehaired trainer seem rather out of place with her head popping in the corner. for that you could of either drawn her head from behind or standing next to Patti.

But I think you did and awesome job and Hope you pass to round 3 <3

(also add a link to your trainers app... It's vital.
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StringlessKite Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I agree with most of your tips and if I could turn back time... well, too late for that now. Also Luxray and Blaziken are tilted, Patti (the brown-haired trainer) is sort of moving backwards, I was trying to draw her as if she was taking a step back. Raichu is in the air, so no tilting for it.
As for Houndour and Ascot (blue-haired trainer)... Yup, no excuses. They are sorta wrong. Ascot had to be in that place because of the strategy described. And if there was nothing there the corner would seem empty. Her pose sucks tho.
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Wild-Baguette Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
Well as you said nothing to do now. I still really dig the picture <3 I wouldn't be able to draw that idea myself so points for that!
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StringlessKite Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ^^ Crazy perspectives are my idea for the whole BFOI, I'm still learning but even such a picture was a valuable lesson.
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