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"Bro? how come none of the other girls will play with me?" 
"Because lil girl you're  too cool." 
He remembered the little girl with the original Strider shades that used to stand at his feet, he and Dave had taken her in after finding her digging through there garbage a few years back. (Name) didn't have many friends other then Dave all the kids labeled her as weird for no reason at all they just didn't like her so Bro always tried to keep her in the dark about her social deficiency she was being raised Strider she isn't weird shes cool.

"Bro? How come Dave doesn't like to hang out with me anymore?"
"Because lil girl you two are too cool you rival one another." 
He now saw the young girl now a twelve year old still in her shades, busted up from the many strifes she had encountered so far in her young life. Dave one of her only friends was now abandoning her she was desperate to keep him in her grasp but he just drifted further. Being the good Bro he was he just told her it was nonsense and she believed him with all her heart her Bro never lied to her. 
"Bro? Why am i so.....tired?"
"Because lil girl...you need rest." 
He now looked at the 15 year old girl he had raised, a strife gone wrong she was just trying to protect her Brother, he was hurt and some fucker was gonna shove his shitty sword through him and just pick pocket him she couldn't just stand an watch not her Bro she'd save him.

Or so she though yes she had stopped the guy but in the process she now lay on the ground the sword through her own chest bleeding out on the concrete 
"Bro?" 
"Yeah (name)?" 
"Your okay now right? You're safe were gonna be okay right?"
"Yeah (Name) were okay, were going to go home and were going to be fine." 
"Bro I'm going to die aren't i?"
"Lil girl you're  too cool to die." 
He watched (Name)'s chest rise and fall now slower her breathing was becoming more labored,he grasped her hand he kept telling himself shes will be fine, she was gonna be ok she was always ok. (Name) reached out and touched her bro's cheek for what she knows is the last time 
"Bro?"
He tried to keep his facade he couldnt cry no matter what he was Strider
"Yeah lil girl?" 
"I know its not cool but i know i'm not gonna make it but just know and tell Dave too i love you." 
"We love you too." 
One tear did happen to escape from under his ironic shades which were now fogging up "I'm gonna miss you guys, i promise ill hold a spot just for you guys wherever i end up." She laughed a little a raspy weak laugh her eyes then finally shut and she let out her final breath.

He pulled his sword out of her chest and picked her up carrying her home. When he arrived he got Dave he was devastated as he followed his brother into the nearby woods.
They laid her down in a field they knew she adored Bro took his sword stabbing it into the ground looking like a cross then finally he picked up her limp body and removed her glasses and set her down into the ground.

They both walked away completely silent until Dave piped up "W-what were her last words ?" "She said she loved us." Dave almost lost his facade but hardened his shell bro handed him the glasses she once wore he gripped them tightly regretting drifting so far from her. Bro couldn't help but remember all those times (Name) came home and talked to him about just everything always asking questions she knew he could answer.
"Bro?" 
"(Name)?"
"Will anyone miss me when i die?"
"I will lil girl, your bro will." ~
I think this is sorta sad stuck but a few days ago i had a dream like this so i decided it might be cool to write it to pull your heart out -w-
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nick-fwan Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2018
NOW WAS THAT REALY NECESSARY
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ElDetorito Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018
I am CRYING SO HARD
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TheKiwiKiller Featured By Owner May 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am legitimately crying at 1 AM because of you.
Feel proud of yourself. 
It's not a gross sob, or a wailing cry 
It's the silent tears... flowing down from your eyes and down your cheeks as you feel your cheeks heat up but you stare. 
Again, feel proud.
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MissSoda04 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2017
Tears: *trys to fall from my eyes*
Me: GET YOUR ASS BACK IN THOSE SOCKETS YOURE TOO FUCKING COOL FOR THAT SHIT
Tears: *rolls back up quickly*
Me: Life is a bitch, so I made it my bitch
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TheKawaiiAmphros Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017  Student Artist
Feels: *Mugging Me*

Me:NO!

Feels: You Cant Fight Me.
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ChickWithTheHips Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017
FEEEELLLLLZZZZ
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FeirceDeku Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
JEGUS CHRIST CONGRATS THIS IS THE FIRST FANFIC THAT HAS MADE ME CRY! GOOD JOB
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DemonicButterfly-DB Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student General Artist
wHY MY FEELS I CAN'T BREATHE
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pikachu45638 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017  Student General Artist
I THOUGH THIS WAS GONNA BE SWEET
NO ITS SALT
DONT GET ME WRONG I FUCKING LOVE IT
BUT WHY
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SpacedOutDerp Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Student General Artist
.....shit.
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TheKawaiiAmphros Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Student Artist
I was playing wake me up inside my Evanescence While Reading This * GROSSS SOBBING*
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:iconkitsunegirl03:
Kitsunegirl03 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016  Student Artist
I'm definently not on the verge of tears over here how could you even think that...
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:iconshuuisbae:
shuuisbae Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016
Born a strider die like a strider
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:iconruby-night:
Ruby-Night Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not crying, you're crying! X'(
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TicciTegan Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
DX its sooooooooo sad
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Crimsonbloodheart Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't understand what happened
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simpleton-s Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Same but it was still pretty sad to me when they died. I think I was overly sad actually. It's 2 am, which would explain why I think.
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ShiiKit617 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I literally cried. Genuine pre-teen tears.






Salty.
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AliceBarron Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016
I like your story. I wish it made me cry. It would have proven to me that I can show feelings again. Sadly, I don't think it will happen. My facade won't fall.
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IceandLion121 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Student Artist
Everyone: *has feels*
Me:...... :| so................. This is giving me so damn much inspiration for a story, where I want to have the reader as the life God tiers, so this just added to the list of what I wanted to do for the reader! Thanks! :D 
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dashiepotter122 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2016
Ayooooo send me a link!
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IceandLion121 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Student Artist
I'm not done, and my old account on my old Quotev one was deleted, so now I have to redo em, but I'll send you link to my Quotev account: www.quotev.com/LightVsNight
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BakeryGirl257 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
I was listening to Little Talks by Of Monsters and Men while reading this and i started crying when simultaneously the lyrics "Just let me go we'll meet again soon." and I/Her died. ;-; WHY TIMING?! WHYYY?!
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ferriluver101 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
Go FYCK urself Dave
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sailormoonnerds Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was not okay 😢 (awesome job)
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PiriLuzoVisayMina Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015  Student Artist
That one moment you start crying in a fanfic... This is one of them ;~;
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Skyye2 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
Crying Mako  Allrainbow cry daSad Foxy Animated Chat Icon feelsInside Out Reaction Icon: Sadness Fool Emoji-37 (Waving and Crying) [V3] 1 [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Jake crying plz 
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MomoBio-Fan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
FEEEEEEELLLLLLLSSSSDanisnotonfire: FEELS the feels Feels Pikachu Crying Plz Pikachu Crying Plz tears You Broke Chica's Heart (Chat Icon) Inside Out Reaction Icon: Sadness Steven Universe Amethyst(I Never Asked To Be Made) crying fella (Reactions) Pewds - Facepalm MEMEME - Hana Reaching + Sad MEMEME - Hana Reaching + Sad 2 Nooo! Mio (Crying) [V2] Crazy Girl (Forever Alone) [V6] Crazy Girl (The Feels) [V6] 
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BestGoddessEver Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015
Im in a room with my parents and tears my are unintentionally falling. I am now hiding my face with a pillow. ;_;
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Alatarielthehuntress Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it would be a nice story.


I'm crying off my cosplay makeup.






THANKS
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scalematejustice Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
 Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
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Homestuck767 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
"Bro?"
"(Name)?"
"Will anyone miss me when i die?"
"I will lil girl, your bro will." ~

This part murdered my feels
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry XD
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Homestuck767 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
*dies again* (×_×;)
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Was it with a sword?
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Homestuck767 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
...omg I can't breathe xD
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IceandLion121 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Student Artist
*gets John* HURRY! HELP HER ((Sorry, I love seeing comments :3 Heh, not author, just love watching peoples comments, since I'm heartless))
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Homestuck767 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Omfg XD I freaking love this reply and you right now
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IceandLion121 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016  Student Artist
XD, thanks :) <3
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TimedRogue Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
OH NO IM CRYING
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XxRobothumanxX Featured By Owner Edited Jul 15, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Me: .... *tears forming in my eyes* Bro says I'm cool

I fucking can't handle sadstucks and I was so in the story that I was like : fuck off, be cool
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d347H5Lull4by Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015
I   A M   C R Y I N G   T H I S   I S   N O T   F A I R
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
BRO WHY AM I CRYING

because this story is flipn sad

Kirah stop talking to yourself

Okay
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ISLANDOFKAMILLE Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I actually cried
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xenialii Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Student Artist
T_T
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masterkat6 Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Q.Q So sad, it's beautiful.

Thanks for the story!
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Wingedwolf12 Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Student Artist
Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1]  MY FEELS!!
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Sophia356 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
This was so cute but really sad BECAUSE SHE/I WAS BULLIED ALL MY LIFE JUSTTO DIE FOR WANTING TO PROTECT BRO AND DAVE WAS BEING AN ASSWHOLE AND DIDNT CARE AS MUCH ABOUT HER/ME UNITL SHE/I DIED THAT ASS (but I love him so) 
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awesomeness39 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
OH GOD THE FEELS HURT!!
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0hSn4p Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
OH MY GOD. Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
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