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Okay! Whew! Here I go! First off, I really love the colors and "knifestrokes" here. The colors for the fall leaves, despite their seemi...

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When the sun goes down and the days go by
And the children of the past finally sigh
I will stop my walk and look to the sky
And remember the times when I wasn’t shy
I look to the moon and  the stars to ask
How is it that I couldn’t shake it off?
Was it such a difficult task?
Back then when I was naive it seemed so tough
But even with all the pain and grief I’ve had to bear
I see that it may have been worth it
How endearing you were to me dear
Yet the thought of you brings me to a fit
You weren’t a lovable guy yet I wished to try
And it’s scarred me but I still wouldn’t cry
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Arcana
Rya was the strongest and the most skilled wizard among the first years. But when it was only the raw talent that was considered, all the professors agreed that Rya would probably be stronger than most of the senior wizards and witches combined. Coming from a family that has produced many powerful sorcerers, it was rather natural for Rya to have such talent.
He was a KING from birth. He could have anything he wanted, when he wanted....
Besides his powerful family and talent, Rya was also known to be a gentle and kind person. He was often seen helping his fellow peers with their spells and potions. He always had a welcoming smile on his face. Rya was the idol of the Tower sorcery school. He was the most sought and well-known person in the school.
Like all family with a long history and influence, Rya's family had their own scandals. Rya's mother and father were married to each other for the sake of keeping the reputation and power of the family. It was a typical thing in any family with
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Under the Cherry Blossom Tree
Harmonia walked towards the cherry blossom tree that stood in the corner of the school lawn.  10 years has past and yet to her this tree never seemed to age. She was thinking of all the times she spent under the tree alone, the day she met Regulus for the first time and the last she saw Regulus under the tree. Regulus had jet black hair, twinkling blue eyes and a playful smile. He was  sleeping on the highest left branch of the tree when she first saw him. At least she thought he was sleeping, otherwise she wouldn’t have sat down at the shade that day if she knew he wasn’t.
To be precise, it was the first day she actually talked to him. Harmonia had already seen the boy because he was the new transfer student. It was also hard to not notice him because he was always causing all kinds of trouble. On his first day, he dropped a banana peel near the door on purpose so the teacher would trip. Ms. Keen, the music teacher slipped and hit her head on a desk and had to be
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Oh look! as soon as i posted my previous status it became only FIVE! (fake happy voice) how very curious~~~would you stop screwing with me da??!
deviantart is really doing to the dogs these days. i don't have anything in my correspondence but it says i have SIX things in my notification box. 
Okay! Whew! Here I go!

First off, I really love the colors and "knifestrokes" here. The colors for the fall leaves, despite their seeming random placements, are beautifully aligned in a way that they create a nice gradation, which I find very pleasing to look at. If this was intentional, I would like to applaud you for your color usage. Also, I find the little touches of blue amongst the trees and the blue road to be appropriate and refreshing due to the overwhelming reddish and greenish tones.

Secondly, I personally was quite curious about and surprised about this painting being done with a palette knife, but it did explain the clean and smooth texture of each of the strokes. I think that was very unique and original of you to do so.

I love fall, and I really felt like going on a walk in the park to do some leaf peeping when the leaves change color here.

I do have one negative to point out, though it's really just me being nitpicky. I expected this piece to be predominantly red due to its title:"Red Fall 1," (I'll be waiting for the 2) but I don't think there's enough red in this painting for the title to be "Red Fall 1."

Nevertheless, this is a beautiful painting! Great work overall!
I realize on many occasions that a person's work ethic and skill in their craft often has little to no connection to their matureness. It's a shame that one of my favorite artists are like that. But then again....maybe it DID show in their work performance. 
When the sun goes down and the days go by
And the children of the past finally sigh
I will stop my walk and look to the sky
And remember the times when I wasn’t shy

I look to the moon and  the stars to ask
How is it that I couldn’t shake it off?
Was it such a difficult task?
Back then when I was naive it seemed so tough

But even with all the pain and grief I’ve had to bear
I see that it may have been worth it
How endearing you were to me dear
Yet the thought of you brings me to a fit

You weren’t a lovable guy yet I wished to try
And it’s scarred me but I still wouldn’t cry

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