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I placed the gun into my mouth,
pointed as high as I could.
I tried to pull the trigger,
but nothing worked as it should.
I heard this voice inside,
Deep inside my mind.
Have you lost your way girl?
Has hatred made you blind?
If you pull this trigger now,
Your life has been for naught.
All those who have loved you,
Will reap the pain you Wrought.
There is life outside this door,
Love beyond your walls.
Why waste away you life,
trapped inside these halls?
Pull the trigger if you wish,
But see the children you will leave.
Your Friends and Family too, you see?
All of them whom shall grieve.
heh, do not read if weak of heart....
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myownnightmare Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2004
thats amazing...it really makes me think...
very well done!
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2004  Student Interface Designer
thank you :)
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myownnightmare Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2004
youre welcome
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Duathron Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
that''s cool! i like it very much ;)
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004  Student Interface Designer
thank :)
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Duathron Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2004
it also reminds me on a squirrel called Foamy :D
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2004  Student Interface Designer
have no idea what you are talking about, lol
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Duathron Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2004
look @ [link] and you'll see :D
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2004  Student Interface Designer
*scratches head* sorry, still don't get it, :giggle: might just be to sleepy right now to understand it.
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Duathron Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2004
hm, the toon isn't there anymore.... but it was great fun :D

look there for an mp3 : [link]

it's called "Go Boom"
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2004  Student Interface Designer
I saw the site, and a good laugh anyway :)
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insober Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004  Student General Artist
Wowzers, i like that a lot. You have great skill with words!!!
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004  Student Interface Designer
thanks :) I actually came up with it while getting ready for bed the other night, and finished it up yesterday
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Bozos Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
This... this is intense. Really a piece of art, yes, but it begs a few questions...
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004  Student Interface Designer
yeah, I know.......
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dplax Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
This poem is so rich with emotions that it is amazing. I hope you manage to get through this hard period!
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stormymystic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004  Student Interface Designer
thanks :)
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