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Read more pages of the story HERE.

About the abrupt coloring change: 
The following colored pages were lined and colored in 2012, so please continue reading despite the old art. Enjoy the story!~

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---Original Description, Nov 19, 2012---
Yay! Here's page 2! I might not do the other ones in full color... I might just keep them grayscale. Unless you guys think I should keep doing them full color like this. Input? owo

I like this page a lot! Not as much as page 1, though. I think page 3 will be fun to do in color. I'll have to think about this. XD
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TheEpicDoodler's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

You did awesome on this. just a few things though...
1) the mains feet look a tad bit weird
2) on the last frame with the girl yelling at the boy to get up the main in the backgrounds feet look unusual :/
3) the meteor should also look more like lava, with blacks, oranges, reds, yellows, the whole shebang.
other wish then that nice execution <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

sense I don't have much else to write I'll just ad random words here :/

hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm

done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)"/>
StickFreeks's avatar
Well, I do agree with the proportions... I was in a bit of a rush to finish this page before the huge break. I don't think I'd put any lava in the meteor. It honestly looks better on the school monitors, here it just looks washed out and weird. XD

Not sure why you took off on all the vision and originality though. XD If you're going to do that on critiques, you have to tell artists why you're doing that.
TheEpicDoodler's avatar
oh sorry -.-' I'm new at critiquing but I can see details that most wont see so I try to speak my mind :P
StickFreeks's avatar
Good good! That's a start! :meow:
Pointing out details is good, but if you take off for something that you haven't pointed out, it can leave people confused. :3
TheEpicDoodler's avatar
I see lawl I say confuzled :D i'm weird like that ugh stupid copier *smakes with turnip* -.-' again i'm weird but at least i'm true to my self unlike most the people at my school heh... heh heh... yeah *scratches head*
StickFreeks's avatar
I used to say confuzled too. :XD:
TheEpicDoodler's avatar
I'm glad I actually can talk to someone on deviant art... oh I drew this awesome picture and the copier/printer still doesn't have ink -.-' i'm starting to get irritated about electronicz :3 *psssh those team rocket* :nod:
fluoroid's avatar
Yell, guy. Yell!
Cameron-Ohara's avatar
Whoa - I'm liking this double jeopardy of "You gotta run!.. not simply because of the meteors, but also because the FILMMAKERS WILL KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T!"
TigerheartFire's avatar
I think you should make all the extras grayscale, while everyone else is in color.
StickFreeks's avatar
I would if the story wasn't about the Extras. XD
StickFreeks's avatar
Um... thanks? ;w;' Please don't use profanity when commenting on my artwork... I really don't appreciate it.
TigerheartFire's avatar
Sorry, I didn't mean to offend. [link]
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TheWhiteJewel's avatar
Wow I am loving this story!! And not cause of the art or the colour or whatever, just the story about looking at the extras. It's nice to see a change in "Magical Girl" comics or whatever.

I love the guy crouching next to the building in the last panel! Favouriting this just for him because he is now my favourite character until further notice.
StickFreeks's avatar
Yay! Thank you so much! I really like it when people like my stories in themselves. ^-^
Eventually, the extras escape and they get to go through lots of other lands with different genres... so the Shoujo world is only one of the many settings they are in along their journey to confront the Producer. :XD:

Yay for random guy! He was really fun to draw~
4 of those people back there are my friends and I. XD
silvermask13's avatar
I can understand why it would be a pain to color, but the digital effects on it look really cool!
And the color brings out certain aspects of it that I hadn't noticed before, in the pencil version. Like the upper right corner of the last panel, where the Main is destroying the meteorite lol I hadn't seen that before
But XD EXV looks so cool in color haha
StickFreeks's avatar
Thank you so much. XD YAY FOR EXV IN COLOR~
I like drawing the mains in the background. They're really fun. :D
silvermask13's avatar
Haha oh dem Mains. Such divas lol They just can't resist cameoing, it's in their nature, and shows in their psych tests when they apply/are tested/examined to become Mains haha
TheEpicDoodler's avatar
LAWL! I see you in the background with your friend :D
StickFreeks's avatar
Yup. XD There are quite a few of my friends in the background!
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