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About Varied / Professional Core Member Christy23/Female/United States Groups :iconfairy-fox-freeks: Fairy-Fox-Freeks
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Hopes and Dreams



Things To Do In No Particular Order:


[X] Publish a book. Conquered 2-3-18
[ ] Open an animation studio in Michigan.
[ ] Work on art for an official video game.
[X] Figure out how to eat a Kiwano melon without the help of the internet. Conquered 3-29-14
[ ] Make a full-length movie.
[X] Play violin on the street. Conquered 9-29-14
[ ] Assist in some way the creation of at least one episode of an official cartoon series.


My Favorite Things:



Colors: Yellow, followed by light blue, purple, and pink
Animals: Foxes, birds, unicorns, dragons, cats, and dogs!
Dinner: $5,000 Casherole
Lunch: Grilled Cheese
Breakfast: French Toast
Dessert: Chocolate Chip Cookies!
Snack: All fruit!
Drink: Whole Milk
Console Games: Harvest Moon: Magical Melody / Spyro: Ripto's Rage / Sonic Adventure 2: Battle
PC Games: The Sims / Overwatch / Stardew Valley
Bible Verse: Mark 19:26



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StickFreeks


Christy | 23 | Female | Makes Things

Hi! I like to animate, draw comics, and sew plushies!
When I'm not working on projects, I'm an avid gamer.
I also play violin and sometimes try to compose music!
Please feel free to say hi and share some artwork!
Thanks for stopping by!






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Who's your favorite EXTRA! character so far? (2018 Update Poll) 

31%
26 deviants said Xavier
28%
23 deviants said Theo
19%
16 deviants said Alexis
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:iconstarsstuff:
StarsStuff Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's Zel from cocoppa 😄 I'm gonna make you some far art ❤❤❤
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kenheghog Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2018   Digital Artist
Hello christy! what about a fairy foxes episodes?
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StickFreeks Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2018  Professional General Artist
Hi! Fairy Foxes is on hold until I finish my comic! :D
Please read it if you'd like!

extra-comic.com
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kenheghog Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2018   Digital Artist
Oh ok!
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MarmaladeSoda Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I apologize for the horrible, childish comments back in 2015.
I'm very embarrassed at myself
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StickFreeks Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2018  Professional General Artist
Don't be embarrassed! Everybody changes modes of speech and commenting habits as they get older.
I still very much enjoyed talking with you in 2015. :D
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MarmaladeSoda Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did too! You were always very supportive despite my cringe~
even when I asked for free art unbeknownst to me at the time but I cherished it
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Ranpu-Tempu009 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch =^w^=
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Eternalskyy Featured By Owner Edited Aug 1, 2018  Professional Artisan Crafter
Hiyas, I promised to read your comic. ^^
The good: I like how you show characters at times deep in thoughts, thinking things through before being entirely random in their actions suddenly. I also like some of the scenes with using backgrounds and characters in the distance such as the fish tank scene, and using manga to that type of camera angle is a great thing to do. Use of mud in the rainstorm is great, too. I like to see use of characters you don't often see, like the moth, the giraffe, etc. is a nice breath of fresh air.

what can be improved: I think more in depth personality to the characters, making new characters which will soon appear be much slower transitioned and dramatic, possibly taking a whole page just to appear and show up, characters more important to the plot to be given time or mystery behind what they look like, a lot of anime jokes used in comics in the beginning showed up very frequently (too often) to have a in depth plot line. The constant use of words the story doesn't explain is a little confusing to creating focus for the reader with the random actions following up through that. The fox is a little too random, except when flying on the winged creature and showing dramatic actions which totally makes sense, but I picture it with a very high pitched voice and it'd be far too annoying with dramatic actions over-used like the elevator scene and everything afterwards, until the flying scene, if that makes sense.

Maybe thinner lineart or try a more detailed style especially for shading, hair, etc. will boost the serious style up a notch if you're looking to do so.

Keep in mind i'm a deep thinker into anime more than cartoons, though, so my critique may or may not be helpful. ^^ that's all I got for you, I think a lot of scenes show the characters so often that I lost interest and couldn't really read into it after they landed and gave out pamphlets. I don't necessarily understand the plot, either, or how their actions are important if that makes sense. I like series that keep characters discussing the plotline heavily, which makes the reader on edge so I can get into the plot more in depth. I'd work on the plot and maybe have a plot intro, where a narrator would boldly start discussing roles and what they're trying to accomplish (for serious reasons).... and try to not show the characters so often in every scene that comes along, probably less close-ups. It was sort of like being buried in everyone's faces, arms, skin, etc. quite often.
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StickFreeks Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional General Artist
Hi! Thank you so much for reading my comic!

I'm always trying to improve my paneling and cinematography, and it does improve as the comic goes on.
It sounds like you stopped right before things ramped up a bit and answered some of your questions / concerns, but I realize that that is a decent chunk into the story.

The complete "first volume" consists of the first 191 pages and it should explain all the terms used, give deeper insights into each character, and explain why what they're doing is important. I wanted to keep world explanations implicit rather than have a narrator spell out the terms, but I will consider ways to simplify it down sooner.

If you'd ever like to give it another go, please get back to me! But thanks for reading the first bit! I appreciate the feedback. :D
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