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This is for my dear Sandra :iconvillenueve: :heart:


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Wood of deer [link]
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:iconjozjaeger:
Hello, I'm joz and I'm from :iconbeaute-lamour:, here to provide you with the critique you requested. I will be honest, and remember that all critiques are subjective. I hope this helps!

At first glance, my eyes are drawn directly to her midface, which isn't the ideal. The view should be drawn all around the picture, to emphasize not just the woman, but the artistry you've done so beautifully all around the woman.
To add to that, the feathers were a smart choice to lead the view around her - but not enough. I do believe it's because of how differently texturized and bright her skin is.
Around the face, the line between face and feather is not noticeable at first, but distracting when known. The edge of her face could have been darkened so that her face and the feathers seem much more connected, imbued, 'supposed to be'.
The two most distracting things would stand to be the hand below, which looks bright in spots it shouldn't be (the hand should be more background than foreground, to emphasize the face and keep your eyes away from low detail towards the top), and the direction that she's looking. It makes you wonder what's going on over there, when you should really be exploring the picture.
Some places were cropped a little poorly, as I can see one obvious thing on the hand there. However, for the most part, I think it was beautifully done. One problematic crop is the hair, as hair flows and sticks out in random places, but I understand hair is probably really difficult to deal with in a photomanipulation.
Something I really, really admire is that you took a tree and some antlers and made something very beautiful and creative out of it. However, that's where more of the view should be. there should be more emphasis towards the left of the picture than the right, as the woman is already looking right. Perhaps there should have been less darkness on the left, or something to grab your attention otherwise. I was thinking another "horn" on the right side to even it out, but the direction she is looking makes that difficult. She should be centered, as the main focal point ignores all that above.
The textures you used were beautiful and perfect for the situation, in my opinion. The feeling of the piece isn't translated very well, as her face remains very smooth and untouched, differentiating it and the feathers from the rest of the picture - more conflicting than contrasting.
Although I'm probably picking it apart, this is a very lovely image overall. the model is beautiful, the feathers are a magnificent touch of grandeur, and you were very creative creating such a piece.

Thank you for your time, I hope this has aided you.
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Not much can be said with your work. Mainly because you've already made your point with your effort. All I can say at the moment is that the image is splendidly melancholy, with the dark color scheme and solemnly perplexing theme. Your dear Sandra would be very proud. The only constructive critique that I can give you is to add a bit of a creative catalyst for future works, giving it somewhat of a mainstream appeal and appearance that still maintains your originality [that is, if you plan to preserve your originality and work around the artistic norms]. Again, not much can be said here!

Verdict: Thumbs up!

-2Bop1283 AKA TheJackpotKid (Tumblr)
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Dark-Angel669 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stunning work :heart:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :heart:
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Dark-Angel669 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my pleasure,dear :heart:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Apsolutely amazing!!!:wow:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my dear :love:
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Incredibly beautiful, mysterious and creative!! Stunning art sweetie! Love it!! :hug:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
wow thank you sweety :tighthug:
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CindysArt Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
So very beautiful work! :love:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my dear :hug:
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Marazul45 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very beautiful!!
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
wow thank you my dear :hug:
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Marazul45 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Always a pleasure for me!:heart:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:heart:
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Beholdentolove Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome work!!!!!! :clap:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my dear :love:
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Beholdentolove Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure! :heart:
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maiarcita Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
It's so beautiful!! Great work :love:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my dear :hug:
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maiarcita Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Welcome!!:iconcocoloveplz:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
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vampirekingdom Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   Digital Artist
Great work my dear and fantastic dedication for our dearest Sandra!!!!:love:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :tighthug:
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ThePix Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Lovely work! :heart:
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :heart:
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mistersingh Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Wonderful work:)
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
wow thank you!!
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mistersingh Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
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MachiavelliCro Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Great work!!
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my friend :hug:
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MariaBeloArt Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful my dear :love:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you Maria :tighthug:
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beyzayildirim77 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very Beautiful Artwork .......!!!!
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you sooo much my friend :tighthug:
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FictionChick Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!!
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you my dear :heart: :hug:
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Le-Meridian Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Très joli :)
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Merci :)
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begoniax Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow fantastic realy nice love it
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:iconstellartcorsica:
stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :love:
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alexnoreaga Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful work :clap:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you my dear :hug:
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Villenueve Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My lovely,sweet and kind Stella,a thousand thanks for this superb and beautiful work,I am the most blessed person in this world for having your kind friendship!:worship::rose::hug:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Oh I am so gald you like it!!!I wanted to make something dark for you and I loved doing it!!! :hug:
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KarinClaessonArt Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Excellent and very creative work dear Estelle:love:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you Karin!! :tighthug:
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KarinClaessonArt Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You're very welcome dear:heart::hug:
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
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cebinc Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful!
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stellartcorsica Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :hug:
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cebinc Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You are more than welcome:D
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