I have a bad habit of watching a TV show or reading a book/book series and falling so deeply in love with it that my mind creates a character to place in that world. Hence my wide variety of Fanfiction/Fanart!
I've been writing fanfiction since 2003 when I began my very first Harry Potter fanfiction, A Pair to Change the Rules. Since then I've started two other HP fanfics plus a handful of one-shots, a Supernatural fanfiction, a Pirates of the Caribbean fanfiction, a few one-shots for other shows/books and plenty of fanart (photmanipulations for the most part).
I love making new friends, so feel free to note me or leave me some comments!
Groups I regularly contribute to:
I am the current founder of:
Favourite Visual Artist
Nene Thomas, Van Gogh
List is too long
Favourite TV Shows
Way too many to list
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
So many.... mostly rock of any kind.
I'm not even going to attempt this one...
The list goes on for ages..
Halo I,II, III, COD4, WoW, Fable I II and III, Sims2
Favourite Gaming Platform
Xbox 360, Wii, PC
Tools of the Trade
Anything I can write with! Camera and Photoshop :D
Writing; Reading; Photoshopping; Photography... for more, ask :-)
I think this is a really good start. I liked the plot, and I'm interested to read more. However, your punctuation could use work. Commas are important, and semi-colons don't hurt either. Spelling words out is important too, so try not to shorten things like 'you' and 'your/you're' to 'u' and 'ur'. It's important to be aware of the different types of words and their uses (you/you're, there/their/they're, etc.). Pay attention to you capitalization, too. Aside from those, I think you've got a really great start. Your ideas seem solid enough, and I think this has great potential. You just need to focus more on the mechanics of the piece, and you'll be golden.