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StarryHunter

Slytherin. Hunter. Writer.
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My Bio
I have a bad habit of watching a TV show or reading a book/book series and falling so deeply in love with it that my mind creates a character to place in that world. Hence my wide variety of Fanfiction/Fanart!

I've been writing fanfiction since 2003 when I began my very first Harry Potter fanfiction, A Pair to Change the Rules. Since then I've started two other HP fanfics plus a handful of one-shots, a Supernatural fanfiction, a Pirates of the Caribbean fanfiction, a few one-shots for other shows/books and plenty of fanart (photmanipulations for the most part).


I love making new friends, so feel free to note me or leave me some comments!

Groups I regularly contribute to: :iconcwsupernatural: :iconsupernatural-library: :iconsupernaturalarmy: :iconsupernatural-club: :iconhasitallcentral: :iconmarauders-club: :iconmarauders-order: :iconmarauders-fc: :iconharrypotteroc: :iconh-p-fanfiction:

I am the current founder of: :iconsupernaturalobsessed:

Favourite Visual Artist
Nene Thomas, Van Gogh
Favourite Movies
List is too long
Favourite TV Shows
Way too many to list
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
So many.... mostly rock of any kind.
Favourite Books
I'm not even going to attempt this one...
Favourite Writers
The list goes on for ages..
Favourite Games
Halo I,II, III, COD4, WoW, Fable I II and III, Sims2
Favourite Gaming Platform
Xbox 360, Wii, PC
Tools of the Trade
Anything I can write with! Camera and Photoshop :D
Other Interests
Writing; Reading; Photoshopping; Photography... for more, ask :-)

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Comments

:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I think this is a really good start. I liked the plot, and I'm interested to read more. However, your punctuation could use work. Commas are important, and semi-colons don't hurt either. Spelling words out is important too, so try not to shorten things like 'you' and 'your/you're' to 'u' and 'ur'. It's important to be aware of the different types of words and their uses (you/you're, there/their/they're, etc.). Pay attention to you capitalization, too. Aside from those, I think you've got a really great start. Your ideas seem solid enough, and I think this has great potential. You just need to focus more on the mechanics of the piece, and you'll be golden.
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MY DARLING! :glomp:
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THANK YOOOOU!!! (I don't have internet still. It has been since April. I am dying. But yes. Thank you!)