starhavenstudios

Hey, I found this while browsing and noticed you were looking for some critiques.

This looks really good. I love the warm, glowing highlights shining on the characters. If I could offer some advice, I have the following: first, the girl's breast looks weird (I think adding a line to separate the breast and the arm would definitely show a breast); second, where the breast meets the ribcage, the line should not be pointy but rather curvy (otherwise, it looks like the clothes are tucked underneath the breast); finally, I think there should be some glowing effect on the tree in the foreground (since the characters are glowing, the tree by them should be glowing).

Overall, it looks real nice (originally, I thought it was a real poster).

What a beautiful piece. Your use of bold colors stand out between the subject and the flowers. Your use of the drip technique on the flowers really work well. I love the use of water to color ratio to soften the skin or bring shade and light in the hair and the flowers.

However, I believe using the drip technique on the hair. I guess it's because the drips happen on the flowers to extend them, but the drips on the hair only appears somewhere in the middle. I also would like the flowers to be outlined in ink since everything else seems to be inked (including the hair).

This is just my opinion, but, overall, this is nice.