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Just chatting with Snarzer about Aus and stuff
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anxietyfluffy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Student General Artist
hmm

here's some critique:
The body of the dinosaur looks like a triangle with paterns on it, please fix that by looking at a referance.
Also, tails arnt that small unless its naturally small, and the eyes are too edgy for a normal person's liking.
It looks like the t.rex? has 1 arm, and i'd recommend making it look like its connected to the shoulder.
The chair on the human looks ok, but the chair for the t.rex? looks like it had a problem of some sorts.

I would go on, but i would not want to waste your time.
Thank you for reading my critique.
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StantheSpider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I understand the critique, but there's also the things I have trouble with.
1.) The triangle is actually the robes of what his character wears in DeviantTale
2.) I'm very garbage and I'm extremly tired, I'm also not good at showing that sometimes I only show one arm as the other one is relaxing on its side
3.) the chair is actually a large seating thing, like I've said before I'm 'Bone' tired
4.) My puns are terrible
Thank you for the critique though
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anxietyfluffy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Student General Artist
No Problem!
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Snarzer Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Snarzersaurus: huh, we got on paper now
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StantheSpider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Skeeze: Yep, looks like we are"
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Snarzer Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Snazy: so I heard you can make memes be a thing, tell me how good are they in battle?"
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StantheSpider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Skeeze: he leans in his chair a bit as he snaps his fingers under the gloves, a gorilla skull appearing. "This is my trusty Harambe Blaster"
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Snarzer Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Snazy; oh boy, I have snazy blastys, basically Dino skulls that can fire in spirts, if it shoots ya, it's gonna hurt.
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StantheSpider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Skeeze: "Basically I have two forms of magic, Meme Magic and Horror Magic, both equally deadly"
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Snarzer Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Snazy: I have a magical box that gives me buffs, and there a zombie that would whoop anyone's ass in a fight
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