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Dabbler

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The hair could use a bit of shading as it looks a little too "one color-ly" on the parts past her left shoulder making it look like a sprite that was added after the fact. Hair has many different colors in it that blend together.

Also the breasts, mostly the right, are a bit too spherical. Larger unmodified ones tend to have a downwards slope when unsupported.

The texture detail of her skin is amazing by the way. Very few people who draw fictional characters, even fewer who do NSFW content such as this, seem to remember that skin is not as smooth as a marble pillar.