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Past Sins: All Hail The Queen P27 END

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Past Sins and Nyx (c) :iconpenstrokepony:
MLPFIM (c) Hasbro, :iconfyre-flye:
In honor of :iconrussiankolz: because he made a very awesome fancomic after the facts of this story
but he sadly left DA or changed his account

Ponyville assets by :iconboneswolbach:

Oh boy! Chapter 13 IS DONE!!!!! After a full year! What in the flying heck! So I counted this out to be my 2000th deviation over on Deviantart so I hope you guys like!

I can't believe this took a full year to make, little logical as it is one of the longest chapters in the story.


Oh and: I. AM. A. DIRTY. TRACER. (Not that people will care)

<<Prelude
<<Chapter 1
<<Chapter 2
<<Chapter 3
<<Chapter 4
<<Chapter 5
<<Chapter 6
<<Chapter 7
<<Chapter 8
<<Chapter 9
<<Chapter 10
<<Chapter 11
<<Chapter 12

<<Previous - Next Chapter>>  

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SaiyanstrongHobbyist General Artist
Discord.  He could defeat her.  And all the chaos she is spreading is sure to free him.
fanfrevr's avatar
Along with all the other fans I love this story, expect more, and I wish this was canon because it really is enjoyable
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fnafgamer2006Hobbyist Filmographer
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Shy Fluttershy Free avvie  it ended alredy?! anyway goodjob I really really liked it!Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Mane Six Clap 
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SpokenMind93Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not yet DONE done xD Just taking a small break between chapters.
Recon-777's avatar
I wish to congratulate you again on finishing that monumental chapter! What a task!
Here's hoping the rest of the story goes much more smoothly for you!
I haven't got around to pulling out my video tools yet, as I have been busy with my own story's projects. But I do want to encourage you to not lose hope on finishing Past Sins. I know it's a long haul still, but you can do it! 
Recon-777's avatar
Wow! You finished the chapter (WOOT!)
I bet that feels soooooo good. :D
Congrats.

That means I should probably get on that video.
K4nK4n's avatar
I still don't think I'm ready for the final parts. I literally cried myself a river from reading the original fan fic.
karkovice1's avatar
She somehow looks less threatening without the armour.
ardashir's avatar
Poor Nyxie looks so very unsure about all of this.
folklore17's avatar
folklore17Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because you're true personality is beginning to override this bullshit one
CorrinaFloraline's avatar
CorrinaFloralineHobbyist Digital Artist
Probably your still Nyx, if are nightmare moon, where's the cutie mark
of luna's? Being made by magic of the ritual, can not give it the same
traits as the ones who's exist. No made being can't have the same cutie mark
as the other, you can't be what other ponies thinks you are, or what you are.
You can be Nightmare moon, cause you have no traits of Luna, no cutie mark of
Luna, nothing!!
being made by magic is known to be a blank pony, randomly scrabble into what features
you have, and can't be the same as the ones who's existed. You, are, NYX by heart and mind, not
Nightmare Moon, nor Luna, you....are still Nyx!!!
fotland42's avatar
You may be the one and only queen, but there are still two ponies who think they can make you do things you don't want.

I don't think you have to worry about both of them, though. Nightmare Moon talks a big game, but it's plain to see that she can't actually make you do anything.
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nerdbeasterHobbyist Artist
it would be crazy if there was a sudden tirek XD
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jo-jo999freakStudent Artist
D.R.: 😈 well if you like your highness i can easily slaughter them. Just say so and I'll do it.
SpokenMind93's avatar
SpokenMind93Hobbyist Digital Artist
No.
jo-jo999freak's avatar
jo-jo999freakStudent Artist
D.R.: as you wish (bows)
awsomenick3's avatar
Yes I am the dreaded Nightmare Moon *hugs the Twilight Plushie closer* everyone will fear me!
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bobshmit13Student Writer
In her defense, those plushies are super soft! Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (My kawaii plushie) [V6] 
Caustizer's avatar
CaustizerHobbyist Writer
It looks like the Queen needs some male servicing. Perhaps she should "order" one in? =P
jrglass's avatar
Nyx is still a filly she hasn't any thoughts in that area
Caustizer's avatar
CaustizerHobbyist Writer
Hmm she seems fairly old in this. Has she been artificially aged?
FrogInASock's avatar
Read from the start. Her body was magically transformed into that of an adult mare but her mind remains pretty much as it was.
Caustizer's avatar
CaustizerHobbyist Writer
The mind says no but the body says yes! =P
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