My content is mostly of Undertale, open to other fandoms. I'm doing a comic named "Alt-Shift" right now, please read them, I know you'll enjoy it. Welcome everyone to my Deviantart page.
If you want to dub any of my comics you're completely allowed (no mather the language) I only ask the URL of this page in the description (and if you want at the end of the video too but that's not a requirement). If you can send me a note with the dub done I would like to see it.
I thoroughly enjoyed your comic, ALT-Shift. I honestly can't give any critiques due to me not being at such talent or higher. But I wish to see you succeed with this comic and to see it be given more acknowledgement and praise.
I personally love how the designs are similar to the original but hold that subtle difference even with how some of the portray themselves.
well thank you, I really love read my comment and have this support. It has become progressibly harder to make one page but I'm working harder to complete the comic. And please don't be affraid to give critiques I'm open to them and you don't need anything to not say what you feel it could make it better.
All I can say is that everything looks just as fantastical and with how hard it is with making comics, I can only hope to wish you luck with it.
I really like your comic, your characters and I love the designs, but I come to comment a detail
the characters look as if the original versions had changed clothes, not as if all their lives took a different direction.
for example, your toriel design looks like toriel is wearing a suit of armor, not like all of toriel's life took a different path.
i think there should be changes in the character designs that denote the changes in their lives.
for example, toriel could have more muscles and scars, or be more cautious with her surroundings (not going near the windows, locking the doors, etc.) to show that her role in this world changed.
asgore doesn't have to carry a suit of armor all day, so he could look less muscular but being taller. undyne is now a diva, so she could act more extravagant, etc.
Again, I'm not criticizing anything, I just wanted to highlight this detail.
Well I would have no problems if you were criticizing me this comic is the first that I'm showing to an audience and my only goal is improve. In the things that you said, you really have a point there, my idea was that they should have the same designs from the original AU, but with dialogs, backstory and personalities based in my thoughts of every character, let their dialogs say what its different, but hints, some perk or maybe one little thing that they do will make them more deep (I was planning do that for Chara but it will be better if I do with everyone) I don't know with the designs (exept asgore's) but I will try do something else with them. (and yeah now that I'm thinking Toriel would look better with some scars maybe I will probably draw some when she wear something else.). Thank you very much for your supporting I'll see you next time.