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this isn't stolen, just very old! i changed my name from chillisart about 4 years ago :)

Na'vi Shadow
Its no problem! I'm glad I could help ^^
I think water is a weakness for most artists, me included, but for someone who's weakness is water, It's pretty darn good :)
Celestia by the Spring
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I don't critique very often, so excuse my rustiness XD

I'll do pros and improvements:

Pros:

- Celestia's anatomy looks wonderful.

- The shading is great! Her mane and tail look really well done and I can tell you put a lot of time into her.

- The composition is good and works very well.

- The background is laid out well (If you know what I mean)

Improvements:
- I'm no expert at drawing water, but to me it looks a little... flat and sort of blurry. Maybe if you added some more defined ripples around Celestia and around the waterfall, and boosted the colour balance/saturation a bit, it might look less flat and fit in better as the rest of the scene is quite vibrant.

- The mist near the 'end' of the waterfall is very thick and blurred for the angle the water seems to be coming from (It basically looks like a small waterfall), maybe lower the opacity of it in places so we can see where the waterfall and the pool meet.

- When a subject is in water, the water tends to leave a 'ripply' effect near to the pbjects/things placed in the water, Its quite hard for me to explain, so I recommend getting references of people or animals in water so you can see how it reflects off someone.

Overall this piece is beautiful and visually appealing, I really like it and I think you are a wonderful artist. Next time, I would say to try and define certain things more and blur them a little less, although this looks really good, It could look even better <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/> Keep it up!

~Xifox
Celestia by the Spring