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CH1-7

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Oh man, I'm never again drawing trees, when we are out of here, no more trees!
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OutlanderAshton's avatar
I love a good Adventure!
348joey's avatar
Half an hour? Really testing my willing suspension of disbelief here.
SozokuReed's avatar
The yellow boxes are Reed's narrative of the events, so "what seemed like 30 minutes" might have only been 15? 10?
Besides Ive seen enough fantasy movies to know those guys never get tired!
348joey's avatar
Unless it's dramatic for them to be tired, yes. Guess I missed the "seemed like" part.
mpz28's avatar
nice :D (Big Grin) Love :happybounce: 
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quinmchale's avatar
I wish I could draw trees like that. They're pretty painstaking to draw, though...
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Ugggg its so annoying, I need to get Timbersaw from dota in here, he would fix those trees!
RedWolf5207's avatar
This is a very nice story retelling. The different artwork style is a nice touch.
SozokuReed's avatar
I have grown a lot, not just in the drawing skill, but dialogue, page layout, and overall story.  Since this was my first project I wanted to make sure it was done right!
RedWolf5207's avatar
Are you going to eventually get to the scene in the pic, "I Need a Hero" ( sozokureed.deviantart.com/art/… )? It's one of my favourite scenes.
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Well, I have to see where the story takes me, it was where I was leading to in the original manga, but things in the Heavensystem world may change!
Wife-Napper's avatar
Curiouser and curiouser. ;)

And on the subject of trees, I actually like how you've kept the trees present but with muted colours in the background of the first three panels. This may be a common technique in comics (I wouldn't know), but either way, it's just a little detail I noticed.
SozokuReed's avatar
It was an idea I had, not sure if others use it... truth be told I havent read comics in years other than I pulled one out to reference good layout.  But I wanted to not have every BG panel look the same, and this was how it came out!
MetalBeowulf89's avatar
I suppose the next story should be set in a desert then? :lol:
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Well, they might head that way later, you never know!
DeeTwenty's avatar
i get the feeling this is retreading previous work? a captured laurel in the future my crystal ball sees......also Pretty girls in high heels in the near future.

Beware of famous ice cream flavours too.
SozokuReed's avatar
Oh yes, this is a remake of the original story, however things will play out a little differently.  I had my heart set on the story but now I'm a lot better than I was, so I figured starting from scratch with some fresh ideas was a good idea
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Lol, good job then on the switching to a castle for the next stage lol.  Nice page on here, quite curious as to what's going on though, thought we'd be seeing some brutes or villains chasing after the girl.  Well, guess I gotta wait and see how they go I suppose
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Well something must be amiss!  I guess you need to wait and find out why this maiden is in a hurry =)
Devious-Drake's avatar
Lol, that's the stinker part, waiting for the next page/chapters lol
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