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Look like Raya has tracked her away to where her sister is being held, but Gale seems prepared for her!  Time to take a break or keep on writing?! XD
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MonikaTheOutlander Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Student Writer
Fur is gonna fly! Or magic... or something!
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LudedWolf Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
Nice!!!!
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348joey Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015
A simple "You found her? Good." would've felt more natural and less expository at the end there. We don't need you to address it as her spirit dove, and I think we all already know what she's there for.
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348joey Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015
"Get back here! I'm not done filling-in prior events that we skipped for no apparent reason and you're not done spouting exposition!"
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All good ideas, and yes sometimes the characters overstate things, but I do need more written dialogue or people will read through these pages too quickly!!
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Wife-Napper Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist
Have to say, the Spirit Dove looks great. That's the type of animal that I'd certainly mess up drawing.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  I rarely draw animals, so when I do it well, Im so happy with myself!
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MetalBeowulf89 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Student General Artist
I wonder if she can speak to it in bird-song?
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They could be... TWEETING haha, sorry I kill myself lol
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OakEgg Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's a nice tower =P
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its pretty tall, and foreboding in that forest!
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Aprion Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
birdy X3 i like it.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Raya loves cute lil animals =3
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DeeTwenty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Im suddenly in mind of the Worms Homing pigeon. Though I have to admit, Raya's spirit dove is much better and less explody. Is that Raya's equivalent to Holy belle?
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That could be a good analogy, I really did want to get that 25th anniversary figure, its soooooo nice *_*
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KatMiLo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dove *v* :heart:
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Figured it fit her personality <3
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finex666 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
lets hop his trap works other wise he going to have a hard time escaping
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not many places to go, unless you teleport away!
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finex666 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
or you make a hole on the wall and you  have to be evil cause you just destroyed a mans house lol
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