Look like Raya has tracked her away to where her sister is being held, but Gale seems prepared for her! Time to take a break or keep on writing?! XD
Fur is gonna fly! Or magic... or something!
A simple "You found her? Good." would've felt more natural and less expository at the end there. We don't need you to address it as her spirit dove, and I think we all already know what she's there for.
"Get back here! I'm not done filling-in prior events that we skipped for no apparent reason and you're not done spouting exposition!"
All good ideas, and yes sometimes the characters overstate things, but I do need more written dialogue or people will read through these pages too quickly!!
Have to say, the Spirit Dove looks great. That's the type of animal that I'd certainly mess up drawing.
I wonder if she can speak to it in bird-song?
That's a nice tower
birdy X3 i like it.
Im suddenly in mind of the Worms Homing pigeon. Though I have to admit, Raya's spirit dove is much better and less explody. Is that Raya's equivalent to Holy belle?
That could be a good analogy, I really did want to get that 25th anniversary figure, its soooooo nice *_*
lets hop his trap works other wise he going to have a hard time escaping