Oh Dang, Laurel certainly has quite a sharp bite to her words doesn't she? I knew she was a B.A. but I thought that side of her would come out in dire need. Well you did say there'd be little tweeks and edits from the original story, and I will admit I'm finding her snappy strong attitude amuzing lol.
Though if she keeps mouthing off, I have a feeling this Wizard will soon grow frustrated and.............well I'm sure I don't have to continue lol. Oh boy, you're getting me anxious for the next pages here lol.