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Wow creating dialogue for a character who has 20+ Int is more difficult than I imagined lol. 
You can clearly see who is winning this argument!
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Sailor-Touko667 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2018
Too bad he's evil.... such a handsome face and a nice pose.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why are the evil ones such cuties? XD actually I just like to draw everyone in my story attractive haha
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Sailor-Touko667 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018
I'm a sucker for attractive people, guy or girl. And how do you know how to make attractive GUYS?
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it helps that I model most of them after me ;) and I'm quite attractive!
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Sailor-Touko667 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018
Got photos? There are photos of me in my gallery.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yes, plenty of photos of me in my cosplay section in the gallery! Looks like you know a little about cosplay :)
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Sailor-Touko667 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2018
Not much.... I don't know a thing about making a costume.
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MonikaTheOutlander Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Student Writer
Nice! She is sassy
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LudedWolf Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
Nice!!!!!!
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348joey Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015
You can't be both worried sick about Raya and certain that she's coming for him.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww this is a fantasy story, you know Raya wouldnt just abandon her sister, besides that what all captives say to comfort the situation even if is cliché
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thormemeson Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you =)
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Devious-Drake Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Oh Dang, Laurel certainly has quite a sharp bite to her words doesn't she?  I knew she was a B.A. but I thought that side of her would come out in dire need.  Well you did say there'd be little tweeks and edits from the original story, and I will admit I'm finding her snappy strong attitude amuzing lol.

Though if she keeps mouthing off, I have a feeling this Wizard will soon grow frustrated and.............well I'm sure I don't have to continue lol.  Oh boy, you're getting me anxious for the next pages here lol.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wanted to have her be a little more spunky and full of life, but she will settle down (for the most part) still the cute and submissive girl we have grown to love =3
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Devious-Drake Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Lol, oh you've certainly succeeded in that.  Quite curious how that side of her will be shown.  Keep up the good work
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhhhh Ive got that covered lol, *shifty eyes*
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MetalBeowulf89 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Student General Artist
I imagine he either considers her stronger than she appears, or is just paranoid, to put such heavy chains on her...
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Or.... maybe he is just into that stuff!  I mean they are obviously girl sized since they are so tight on tiny Laurel XD
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darth603 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's make sure I know what the issue is. Arcane wizards use life energy (shorten their own life) to use magic?
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats the idea, he thinks he can tap into magic without the cost of life force
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Meeowy Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
level up on dialogue skill
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Du na na naaaaaaa, thats the Zelda tune
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OakEgg Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's a really good series :clap:
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why thank you my friend =D
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OakEgg Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why not thank me?
You're very welcome
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Wife-Napper Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist
I like the explanation of the different kinds of magic. And now I'm assuming Raya must be the lady who was sprinting through the woods - straightforward enough, until you toss in Mr. Reed and Miss. Sam, I'll bet. ;)
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That would be her, I'll have proper introductions for everyone shortly!
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KatMiLo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nooo he is explaining his evil plans- he did not watch his Bond movies. tsk tsk
Next time he will just lie and say he just wants to bake her a cake or something.
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think badguys just have to have that level of arrogance, I know its a little overdone, but at the same time it sounds better than 'Shut up and deal with it' XD
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KatMiLo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh for sure, and I guess it creates a little suspense knowing their intentions too. I just yell that whole James bond thing at every movie I see when the bad guys get chatty xD
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well living by yourself just studying magic can be totally boring! Since he has a guest over its only polite to chat =) not like Laurel has much of a choice in the matter!
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KatMiLo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Just likes to show off how smart he is when he speaks xD Poor laurel :<
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats a good way to get the little one mad XD or frustrated, that might be a better word!
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DeeTwenty Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Nice closeups of Laurel there Reed and as for 20+ int. did you know by standard D&D terms a score of 10 represents your everyman?! O_o

Anyway. from so experience it's hard to write a character who is a super genius when you yourself (as a general sweeping net aimed at all who write RP's plays movies....) are not a super intelligent criminal mastermind bent on world domination. but its atleast good to give it a excellent try ;)
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well yea, 10s are average for commoners and heroes that min-maxed their stats, but you dont get to be high level without having some sort of absurd stat because of magic items!
I do feel your pain though, not only how he would talk but how he would fight being that smart.
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13th-madman Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
I'd always thought of that as a matter of pragmatism. Setting traps everywhere or some such, only attacking directly when victory appears assured, and that kind of stuff. Smart villains are a lot of fun in that sense, since the plan invariably goes wrong just in time for them to panic...
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course its been overdone to death, but yeah its the sign of someone who knows what they are doing, and I think readers like that.  It just wouldnt be the same if the villain was stupid
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finex666 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
i think he knows she is lying her teeth out in her last plead
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SozokuReed Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well actually she is telling the truth!  All will be revealed in the NEXT PAGE!
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finex666 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
haha ^__ i am sure he is expecting it so i am sure he has plans
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