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fistfights rolling
in her mouth
indiscriminate
and knock-out,
slap the bruises purple
lavender and nightshade
tucked beneath the pillow,
polyester sheath;
grudges bloom
where love sleeps
prompt: tough
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
That last line. Ugh. Bunny Emoji-73 (Tears) [V4] 
By the universal law of siblingship, I now get to hit you back. 
I'm undercaffeinated. I really like this. 
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SoundlessWhispers Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
:catfight:  
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PoetsHand Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2018
I want to say how much I like this. The title caught my eye, and the way the lines read are very well done!
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SoundlessWhispers Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I am super late in replying, but thank you! 
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2018   Writer
oof

this is well crafted
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SoundlessWhispers Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
This is so overdue, but thank you!
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