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Cover A -> fav.me/dd5p7hy

Cover B -> fav.me/dd6mhau

Next Page -> fav.me/dcun3vl

Prequel Mini Series-> fav.me/dcxlaj0

Minicomic with SG Airachnid & Jack -> fav.me/dcnkbs3

This Page without text -> sta.sh/01spzgzjt950

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For context the Nemesis was shot down and crashed on earth towards the end of the war. To protect the 'cons, the barely conscious Trypticon (who has long since lost the ability to transform and rarely, if never, communicates after the death of Full-Tilt) engaged a stasis field knocking everyone out before crashing.

Millennia later, possibly triggered by human activity near-by, the auto-repair systems finally kick in reviving everyone...

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So I decided to bite the bullet and upload this...

As I'm not the most confident with my writing, I'd appreciate any critiques or advice anyone might have!

Update 22/12/18 - Font styles changed to be more consistent with later pages.

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_{Set in My Shattered Glass AU, features my}_{shattered glass fan designs for Megatron, Starscream, Breakdown, Knockout, Airachnid, Soundwave and Ravage. All of whom are in their Cybertronian bodies as they haven't scanned an earth mode yet.}

_{Note: Shattered Glass is the transformers version of the classic Sci Fi mirror-verse trope, where the Decepticons are the good guys fighting against the evil Autobots.}

_{Here's a link to my other shattered glass pictures.}

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Published: Dec 10, 2018

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NoahSalmonOct 25, 2020

So what’s the deal with Soundwave?

Is it like a mirror of Bumblebee? He got his voice box torn out by Optimus like Bee and Megs

Is it like he can’t really talk all that much or is it like extremely simple phrases?

SoundBlusterOct 25, 2020

Some of his backstory is in this minicomic ;)

Tinymouse12Oct 8, 2020

I love how u made breakdown and knockout a thing in this, I've shipped them from the start or the og prime show

SoundBlusterOct 8, 2020

Thanks :D

(They're officaily partners in the IDW comics ;))

JasmineWriterOct 5, 2020

Airachnid looks like a moth because she’s staring at the light. JUST DON’T EAT IT!

SoundBlusterOct 6, 2020

RosePuppy10Sep 7, 2020

I love how the main colors of Doc Knock and Breackdown are the complementary colors of their original Prime incarnations.

SoundBlusterSep 8, 2020

Thanks (I kinda want to go back and redo these earlier pages... I didn't really know what I was doing for the first 20 pages or so...)

RosePuppy10Sep 8, 2020

Don’t worry about it! They are really good as they are!

Blue-Leader97Aug 22, 2020

Wildrider is deceased partner of heroic decepticon Airachnid who murdered by Evil Autobot Arcee

Skywolf42Edited May 31, 2020

OMG I LOVE THIS OPENING SO FAR. It's fantastic!! It introduces us to some of the characters well enough for a first page, the dialogue feels natural and gives us plenty of information without expositioning, Breakdown and KnockOut are so fucking adorable I love them, and yaay Ravage is there too!! It also sets up the scene and their predicament really well. As a reader I'm already intrigued, which is the mark of good writing with good pacing to boot.

SoundBlusterMay 31, 2020

Thanks a lot! XD yeah I love their paring in IDW.

SoundBlusterMay 31, 2020

*pairing

ZackWriter23May 8, 2020

trapped on Earth, ship underwater, weapons gone, contact with Cybertron has been cut off, and they've been there sleeping for thousands of years. what else can go wrong for them? >_>

SoundBlusterMay 9, 2020

Yeah it's not great...

ChiwwyDawgApr 1, 2020

Shattered Glass AU's are always fun to read. Yours in particular is a treat!

SoundBlusterApr 1, 2020

Thanks a lot!

Ditto70Oct 2, 2019

Comms*

SoundBlusterOct 3, 2019

Thanks!

eta-gamma-14Edited Sep 1, 2019

They've been in stasis for MILLENNIA? As in thousands of years?! Hooo, doggy, that makes the fifty-year hibernation of the Autobots in Animated seem like a light snooze.

Also, hate to burst your bubble, but in-canon Knockout and Breakdown are just friends, not a couple.

SoundBlusterSep 1, 2019

XD yeah...

Actually it depends which cannon. They are coniunx endura in the comics

Skywolf42Edited May 31, 2020

Also it really wouldn't matter if they were canon or not. Fandom creation is not beholden to canon. *eyeroll* (I'm replying to the thread via you because I've blocked the original commenter and I want to make sure you know their behaviour is bullshit and you can do what you like)

SoundBlusterMay 31, 2020

Yeah people are welcome to do what they like in fan fiction, that's part of the fun.

I try to be thick skinned about that sort of thing. More often than not an ill thought out comment is due to ignorance rather than malice.
Even if a comment is due to malice, I find it best not to feed the trolls. You ignore them you take away their power, so blocking is a good choice

Skywolf42May 31, 2020

I've made plenty of my own ill thought out comments in the past when I was younger and stupid. But as much as I wish I could apologise now that I know better, I totally don't blame anyone who might have blocked me over said comments. Curating your online experience is valid and important.

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