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Remited Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to give you my honest criticism with your stories. As a fanfiction writer and a fellow fanfiction writer of Neptunia, no less. I must give my critique on your writing. I am NOT saying to get rid of any of your past work as it's proof of how you've grown and advance. You need to give your stories more creativity and uniqueness, they are all blending into one, they all start and end the same with no original flair to it. It's also immensely rushed with no sense of development or elaboration. I highly recommend on checking out some other's work on Neptunia fanfictions and learn from them. (Mine if you like but you can go and branch out) I know that English might not be your native language but that's no excuse for creativity, that's multilingual and your work is all in English so you have to improve. I'm 22, younger than you are and I'm not perfect in writing but I aim to improve my writing skills, I have much to learn, and I advise you do the same.

I'm not angry or attacking you, I just really want you to improve and expand your writing expectations. I know you can do it if you put your mind to it.
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