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Catherine and Jenny arrive at the hotel just as the bimbo virus breaks out.

Tags: Bimbo Transformation, Increased Beauty, Breast Expansion, Multiple Transformations, Use of Toys, Hair Growth, High Heels

My first proper paycomic. Based on a script by Limerick. Almost 3 years in the making. I'm super proud of this!

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Bed and Breakout preview - 01 by sortimid Bed and Breakout preview - 02 by sortimid

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I'm also experimenting with different product tiers. My hope is for everyone to enjoy the story, whether they want the premium experience or have a tighter budget.

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:iconyamiblade:
yamiblade Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016
I'll buy eventually
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sortimid Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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YRPOtaku169 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Student Writer
So...does anyone in the post-virus world actually want things to go back to the way they were, or are all of the men just horndogs?
Do any of the women try to go back to how they were?
How does the virus affect transgendered people who have gone through hormone therapy?
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Your questions are fascinating.

The story has a very human scope. It follows the staff and residents of a small town hotel. It doesn't deal with the wide-scale, global ramifications of the virus. Your questions only get answered concerning the particular characters in the story. Apart from the one about transgender people, which had never even crossed my mind.

I embarked on a google quest for evidence of gender dimorphism in viral responses. I couldn't find anything. There don't seem to be any viruses that affect the sexes substantially differently. Therefore, a "real" bimbo virus would affect everyone the same. Ours is a fantasy virus with different effects for men and women, so I guess we can make our own rules. We'd have to include transgender people, genderless people as well as those with both sets of genitalia. At this point, my choice would probably depend on the kind of story I want to tell. If I wanted a tragic transgender protagonist I guess I'd have the virus' effect depend on your gender at birth. Or perhaps they're completely unaffected. For a more porn-y story I'd probably go with the more intangible "gender you truly feel like, inside".

Thanks for starting me on this interesting journey!
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:iconyrpotaku169:
YRPOtaku169 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Student Writer
You're welcome, though I was asking because it seems like post-Virus culture has taken the fact that all women are now less intelligent and more sexually active in stride.
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Well, in the story, that's pretty much what happens. Everyone in the hotel just accepts the new status quo and life goes on.

However, it's entirely possible that a resistance has been formed, trying to figure out a cure or restore society. Maybe it's the plot of a different story.
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YRPOtaku169 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Student Writer
Alright. It just surprises me that men would be so willing to take advantage of the situation. I mean, these women are not in their right mindset. The virus is making them do this.
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
You're aware this is meant to be an erotic fantasy, right?
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:iconyrpotaku169:
YRPOtaku169 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Student Writer
Yeah...it still kinda irks me, though...I'm sorry.
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
No need to apologize, your point is perfectly valid. If it helps, the women are just as happy with the situation. Are they being exploited if they consent to it? Is it real consent if they're under the virus' influence? The virus also affects men. If female judgment is impaired, so is male judgment. Are they still accountable?

I don't know enough about ethics.

In the end, it's a fantasy. It's meant to arouse. Like many fantasies its reality would be inconvenient if not downright terrifying. A comic like this allows me to explore it in a safe and fun way.
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MonkeyFlipping Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
That was great. Good work on the art, it was a great progression of framing/backgrounds/storytelling from your usual sequences. Are there any plans for a follow-up?
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Hey thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I don't know if a direct sequel is warranted... Once all women are bimbos, there's no more process left to happen. But I do find the virus concept super interesting.

My working title for this was "Ebimbola Hotel". You could say it takes place in the same universe as my Ebimbola strip. There might be more stories to tell in the same world...
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:iconmonkeyflipping:
MonkeyFlipping Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
I like the virus concept and similar too. I prefer when the hows and whys of the change are more impersonal and societal.

If I had a criticism of the story, I'd say the time skip feels abrupt. There's the spread of the lead in the outfit, but we don't see her interacting with people to get her feelings across. We end up passing over the lead's big moment of acceptance. It would have been nice to have a moment with her dealing with the hotel staff or the male lead. I know that's more on the scripting than on your artwork.
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I agree: a virus absolves everyone of any responsibility. Societal pressures are even better because they're more believable than some mad scientist running around with a zapper.

I see what you mean in your criticism. Perhaps the plot could've used a second pass.

That said, I think the outfit spread is her big moment of acceptance. It's when she finds her place in the new order of things. Seeing as the mental transformation is a internal process, I don't find it absolutely necessary that she interact with someone else. But yeah, maybe there could've been an additional scene of her being more overtly sexual.

Thanks for taking the time to write! I honestly appreciate the feedback!
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:iconmonkeyflipping:
MonkeyFlipping Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
I don't mean a sequel, just further collabs.
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I hope so!
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yazg6 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
which Limerick story is it based on?
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
It's an original story.
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yazg6 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015
you said it's based on a script by Limerick
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Yes. It's not based on an existing story. I adapted a new script that Limerick wrote especially for this project.
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:iconhamcon:
hamcon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Just bought it, going to have to wait to read it since I my phone doesn't't support it.
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome! Let me know what you think!
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:iconjdog0603:
jdog0603 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anyway you could send me a different link? For some reason PayPal doesn't work for me
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I sent you a note!
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:iconnimeyal:
Nimeyal Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It seems that the paypal link don`t work. After typing my password it loading and loading and then appears a blank page with your comic logo. That`s pity. I thought i could be a paypal issue so i try to login and it works. Write me a note if you accept a paypal payment without trying this bugged link.
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Hey there! Thanks for letting me know! I've sent you a note!
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:iconnimeyal:
Nimeyal Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for sending the comic. Sadly that on the end Cathy`s transformation got so fast. I had hope she would more struggle with her fate. But otherwise a really good comic. Very nice.
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sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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:icon3pyon:
3pyon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
It's about time.
I'll buy it.
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Let me know what you think!
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:icon3pyon:
3pyon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Good, but needed some sound effects and a little more refinement. maybe narration.
(finally read today)
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Sound effects? How so?

I'm not a big fan of narration/captions in comics. I elaborate on this more in the extra features of the Collector's Edition. That said, I'm super interested in your thoughts!
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:iconpraedatorius:
praedatorius Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Now I just really want a physical book version of this. Make it happen.
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Haha! Maybe one day! What did you think?
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:iconpraedatorius:
praedatorius Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I think you put a lot of work into your characters. Women look like they have real tenderness, rather than just being sexy and slutty. Also, I love the little details in the background. Great work!
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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:iconfeather--weather:
feather--weather Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
Oooh very nice. I'll probably hold off for a bit and then grab the CE after my next paycheck
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:iconsortimid:
sortimid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome! Let me know what you think!
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