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...and abandoned. <3
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Although swings are an often pictured setting the artist managed to really create something special by framing the picture to be perfectly symmetric. The technique behind the picture is executed very well and helps to support the general feeling of the image by having just the swing in prefect focus.

A great aspect of this work is the vivid lighting combined with the dreary colors. My only critique is that the lighting is a bit too uniformly. Perhaps a border around the image or even a slight vignetting (darkening the border areas) could have helped to intensify the picture even more.

The composition also sets this picture apart from many other similar photographs. The gently curved form of the swing together with the symmetry of the chains and the centric position makes this work create a real artistic feeling.

An overall very good piece of art that would look great when printed and framed.
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Ahbahb Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Dace54874 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great work, I really like the change in colour of the seat
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! =)
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Onihikage Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011
Great photo, very well done! Basically everything that critique says :XD:
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank youuuuuuuu! :3
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LaPetiteAda Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
i love it because although it is very simple it is also very expressive. the focus, the colors and the quality of the photo are great. good work :heart:
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much! :hug:
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nicambi Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish I could critique this... :C
Cause I think its one of your best photos. <3 Along with every other masterpiece in your gallery, but thats beside the point. C;
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much, love. <3
I really appreciate that you like my photogrphy, it took forever to get it just right, and I still haven't learned most of the tricks in the book. But of course, that's part of what DA is for, to learn. :iconglompplz:
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nicambi Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True dat, true dat. C: I know I've learned so much from my watchers and the people I watch. They've definitely helped me improve my drawing skillz. XD
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Drawing was a HUGE improvement once I came here. If you saw some of my old stuff, you would laugh your left butt cheek off. xD
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nicambi Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've delved back there once or twice before. <3 They weren't that bad. Compared to the stuff that barely passed as a scribble for me, your's were Picasso's.:iconluvluvplz:
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
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My drawings from when I was little is where all the laughs are at. xD They all had huge heads and tiny arms and legs. <3
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nicambi Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Mine had big bodies, small appendages, and small heads. XD
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xDDDD

We're opposites.

OPPOSITES ATTRACT.
WE'RE MEANT TO BE SISTAHS. :iconredbullglompplz:
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gloomsome Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
I love the quality and colors of this!
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soPWNEDXcore Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ♥
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