Falling in trust with you, page 228

A lot of words than illustrations in this page. But it's completely understandable, and affective 😁. I'm absolutely here for the internal drama and doubt being felt in these two characters 😆.

Smart of you to open up this chapter by viewing the mental effects left behind by the previous chapter's end. And leaving the base of the panels as some black void helps clarify that this is all taking place in Leo and Cass's minds.

They're both second-guessing themselves when it comes to their romantic partner, but are also feeling burdened by their views as well. You're doing an excellent job narrating how complicated and complex their relationship is through their thoughts 😉.

The art of these two also feel like it's portraying their thoughts via it's almost ghostly gradience. You can tell how bothered they are of each other's previous claims of commitment, while also being unsure of their own sentiments.