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* Sans and Pap are brother who live in a small village(Snowdin)..

- Pap is training to become a knight while Sans works at a Muffet's bakery. Both have magic, the taller brother and create weapons and shield. Sans has powerful magic that he keeps swept under the rug. Most people think he can just teleport short distances, which helps with the bakery's deliveries. (Get a Blaster Dragon form later?)

- Specters are hidden guardians to the royal family (Like the sheikian of LOZ). They have varying power but member has the ability to shape-shift (They can have preference for some form or some can only be used by certain families). And the demon has slowly been reducing their numbers over generations till it was defeated once more.

Their mother was a skeleton while the father, Gaster, was the last full blooded Specter. Who took the form of a skeleton to be with her. He also was the royal mage/wizard of the king. But he went missing and is presumed dead. Gaster kept his family's life very private so many don't know he had a wife, let alone children.

While Pap would be tall like Gaster but would take more from the mother, Sans gets more from their father.

Royal Family:
* Frisk and Chara are twin sisters adopted by the king and queen. Their son, prince Asriel really loves them and they love him. Frisk is the name the skelebros give her, her real name is.....(name)

- Asriel predominantly uses plant based magic. He can send out talking flowers to spy or send messages (Flowery *wink wink*)

- Frisk and Chara are a little harder to figure out. I mean how can I let them have powers without making them op, resetting and such? Should they just not have power and be really skilled with a sword instead. Both?

Frisk has the power to freeze or slow down time for short burst. (No resets). Chara can....too?

Other:
* A lot of the other characters would just be in similar positions to their game counterparts. Like:

Undyne (General)
Alphys (New Head Mage)
Mettaton (A suit of armor given life by Alphy. Kind of like Alphonse Elrics, just without the blood seal and such)

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Plot:

Chara is possessed by an ancient demon who has plans to take over the land. She did wishes to be a queen but was adopted and not first in line. The demon plans to kill the prince.

A member of the court finds out and Chara kills him. Frisk witnesses it and the demon make her a child, though it wanted to kill her but Chara's love for her got in the way. The now younger princess flees the castle. Chara makes the King and Queen think she's dead and the man tried to save her to cover it up.

Papyrus and Sans rescue her from an attacking wolf, but she does hit her head and loses her memory. Sans can sense the enchantment but doesn't know what to make of it.The two brother bestow a name and take Frisk in as their sister.

Things are calm for awhile but then some (Bounty Hunters?) come looking for a child match Frisk's description. But the townfolks, who fell in love with Frisk warn the brothers and distract the men so the three can flee and find a place to hide until it's safe.

Sans takes the to his hidden place in the mountains, which he says was set up to stargaze.

The town decides it would be better they leave and find a place to hide Frisk since they don't know why she wanted. So after gathering supplies, along with some money and extra items donated, they head out. But before that Sans grabs a mysterious wrapped up object from his room.

Next they spend time traveling to keep from being found. They would meet many characters from (name) to . Sans is trying to figure out why the guards are being sent after a little girl.

Some time later they do meet Alpyus and Mettaon, they agree to let the three stay at their place. As Alpyus is the Head Mage and has the power to keep anyone from searching her home (and the fact some experiments may or may not explode...XD)

Asriel sneaks away, he had been secretly working on preventing his demon possessed sister from gaining too much power. Also while trying to find his other sister, Frisk. One of his flowers find her with the Head Mage and he sets out to meet her under the pretense of a hunting trip. (Yes he is a goat who should not be eating meat but I think that's the least unbelievable thing here XD)

But Chara had been waiting for such a moment to remove the prince from the picture. After Asriel arrive at Alpyus' they are attacked and all forced to flee.

After finding another safe spot, Asriel explains the situation abut Chara and who Frisk really is. Alpyus also as takes Sans aside and ask about his power as they reminded her of the previous head mage. He just denies it.

The group realizes they needed help, if there was to be a chance at stopping Chara (But the demon? No clue, though being what Sans and Pap are, they would be able to seal the creature away. But Sans is still keeping their origin under wraps.) Alpyus has the brilliant idea to get the help of the General Undyne , who was a friend of hers.

Undyne doesn't believe then right away but is soon convinced at the hidden turmoil and agrees to provide her assistance. Sans decides that's not enough and teleports back to his village to rally the others.

With Grillby and Muffet acting as decoys with a delivery of food to sneak inside the castle. Some servants catch them but don't raise the alarm after Frisk and Asriel explains situation to them. They had noticed the unusual behavior of the remaining princess. The servants and villagers create more distractions to keep the king and queen away from the coming confrontation.

Chara is waiting in the (throne room?). (lacking some ideas on the conversation) But the demon ends up recognizing magic from Sans and Paps, getting enraged that somehow a 'Specter Whelps'. (Alpyus realizing she was right before). A fight ensues, drawing the king and queen to the loud racket, they get briefly captured but are free soon after.

Sans convinces Paps and Undyne to take the royal family/others and flee. Leaving him to fight the demon head on, which doesn't work very well. While Sans' magic is strong, he also had very limited training outside of what was self taught. Papyrus returns, not one to leave his brother to fight alone.

Demon takes on a more powerful form, Chara passed out and trapped in the core. (ideas?)

The skelebros are trapped under falling debris......

Sans has a flashback to when his father was alive (Is he really dead? *wink*) about Specters power to shape shift, and that fills him with determination and his eye glows blue. Out of the rubble burst a skeletal dragon (like the ones in Skyrim but more european, four legs and such). The demon is deflated and Chara freed.

Sans recalls that his brother is still trapped and digs him out. (One of them should make a joke how Sans is now the taller one).

Finally the royal family reunited but there's also a small bit of sadness as Frisk would have to stay with the King and Queen. But Alpyus brings up an idea of a Sans and Pap being given positions at the caste as a reward, allowing them to still see Frisk. Sans becomes a royal mage while Papyrus becomes the knight he's always dreamed about being.

Frisk is brought back to her real age and slowly her memories return.

(Grillby might get a large royal investment to make his restaurant better than ever before. Same with Muffet. The villagers are also given rewards as well.)

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Then the next part would begin with finding out what happened to Gaster.
*EDIT: Was called Magetale but someone else had that name.

RP Forum: www.fanfiction.net/forum/Under…

If You Can Fav. . .

Characters:
Sans:
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
meta-kaz.deviantart.com/art/Ar…
www.furaffinity.net/view/19622… (original is gone)
universallunatic.deviantart.co…

Papyrus:
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Gaster:
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…
bunnymuse.deviantart.com/art/a…
loumun-versen.deviantart.com/a…

Flowey/Asriel:
icebluu.deviantart.com/art/Asr…
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Toriel: sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Asgore: sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Frisk: rasencore.deviantart.com/art/F…

Chara:
emeraldgal66.deviantart.com/ar…

Undyne: sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Alphys:
sonicxjones.deviantart.com/art…

Mettaton:


Everyone who gives an idea or makes some sort of art will by listed here for all to enjoy!:

:iconemeraldgal66: Picture of Chara.

Wolf suggestion was from :iconfarsidejr:

:iconrasencore: Picture of Frisk.

:iconicebluu: Picture of Asriel.

:iconskysunlight: Picture of Sans

:iconbunnymuse: and :iconloumun-versen: Picture of Gaster

:iconuniversallunatic: Picture of Sans

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Similar AUs: (only listed so people don't confuse my AU for others)

Fantasytale (not like it at all)

Kingdomtale (similar with Asriel as the prince but that's it)

Underfates (most similar to mine:
Alphys is an alchemist(mine's a royal wizard/mage)
Sans is a lazy traveling merchant (Mine's a barker/delivery boy. But has magic.)
Papyrus wields a broad sword (well yeah though mine's a knight)
Much of the characters have not changed too much role wise like Toriel, Undyne, and Asgore. (we share that XD)

Underkeep (hardly like it at all)

Fairytale (hardly like that)

View others here: farsidejr.deviantart.com/journ…
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:iconemeraldgal66:
EmeraldGal66 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  Student General Artist
Hey,I deleted the picture of Mettaton. Could you remove it?
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
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Eevechu Featured By Owner May 29, 2016
I would love to see this made into a web comic.
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
If only I had the time or skill (in making comics)
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Silvursh0res721 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
Afafadafsfdsa I can't wait for the next part. This story is great as well as the AU
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks^^
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thebladesmith Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
can i help? i suck at drawings ( I dont even know how to upload stuff on my account......) but i have a huge imagination and can help with storyline, character background, names of places and side characters (if there are any...), etc. 
also i have school and im a soon to be youtuber so i wont be always available.
please let me know.
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I let you pick what you want, there's not pressure at all.
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thebladesmith Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016
thanks ill see what i can do for now.
also can i add my own oc on this i already have a character i use on other stuff that i can use as my oc, it just needs a bit of tweaking with back ground, powers, personality, etc.
ill use this comment chain to update you on stuff and let you judge it, if thats okay.
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
k
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thebladesmith Featured By Owner May 1, 2016
i got an idea!
when the group is travelling to keep from being found they find my OC ( don't have a picture seeing as i'm not an artist, i'm a photographer. so someone else who's an artist will have to make a picture for me....) who's a wandering blacksmith. the 4 travel together for a while and during that time he teaches paps and frisk how to fight with certain weapons. ex: knife, katana (my oc has an enchanted book that lets him use many spells), and Spatha.
when they finally part ways, soldiers chase after the group and max, my OC, holds them off with illusions and his enchanted hammer. 
what do you think? is it good? or should I change some stuff?
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
If you want to make your own little works with your oc, go ahead. I'm keeping ocs out of the main story for now
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:iconthebladesmith:
thebladesmith Featured By Owner May 2, 2016
okay, I'll look into digital art to see if I have a knack for that. reply to me if your going to use OC'S in your work.
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
k
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Breakerofgem Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016  Student General Artist
nice c:
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
^V^
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MissPunnyPuns Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This sounds so cool!
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Soulflutigress Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Sounds cool :3
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It is^^
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:iconemeraldgal66:
EmeraldGal66 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Student General Artist
hey I did this:fav.me/d9xn5ji
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Little tiny but ccccuuuttteeee^^
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:iconrasencore:
RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Can I do something else? :D Or should I draw a chibi version of Frisk too? Tell me please ^3^
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Surprise me this time^^
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RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ok THE GREAT PAPYRUS Icon THE GREAT PAPYRUS Icon THE GREAT PAPYRUS Icon THE GREAT PAPYRUS Icon 
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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:iconemeraldgal66:
EmeraldGal66 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student General Artist
Here is my crappie Mtt fav.me/d9wd4j8
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:iconicebluu:
IceBluu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I help too?
>v< I really like this au so much

I guess I can help with the design for the Royal Family =w=
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Here a good look to follow for Asriel:
sparkybytes.deviantart.com/art…
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Edited Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure. I am working on Arsiel but feel free to draw your own. May help with my own look. Note he is older in the story but feel free to draw what he might look younger if you want. ^^
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IceBluu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
x3 Is this thing ok for the design?
icebluu.deviantart.com/art/Asr…
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Besides some details being hard to make out, it's great^^
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IceBluu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
>v<
I'll try to color it too?
but can I have some of your thoughts on what color to use?
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That is up too you, maybe lime green or something?
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:iconrasencore:
RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Hum.... can i help? 
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
How would you like too?
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:iconrasencore:
RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
With drawings u.u i'm good at drawing Asriel and maybe Frisk or Chara.... mostly if it's creepy stuff, but i'm good with cute too. Browse my gallery, and if you like my style tell me to draw what you need me to draw ^^
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Well maybe Frisk (girl) wearing a medieval outfit.

www.google.com/search?q=mediev…

Do I need to pay/trade with you? I will give you credit for whatever you draw regardless if there is a payment.
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RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I can try! And there's no need for it, but if you want we can trade! 
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:iconsonicxjones:
sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Try to make the dress purple or have alot of purple bits.

What would you want?
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RasenCore Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Mmmmh, i'll start working on it right now.
For the trade, let's see first if i can do it, then i'll decide ^^
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course.

Keep her young as my idea has her a child. Okay okay enough notes XD
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ForeverRoseify Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016  Professional General Artist
Sounds quite interesting, I'm interested in see where this one goes
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Always adding new thoughts and ideas. and trying to doddle the outfits and such.
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MarshieMonarch Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really interesting AU I'm excited to see more of it. :3
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sonicxjones Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!

Send any tips or suggestions. ^^
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