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Can I....:b+w:. by SonicHearts Can I....:b+w:. by SonicHearts
I'm so tempted to call this "Can I keep you?" because I just... I actually love that line >>
And darn it all if that soundtrack doesn't have an influence on me.

I plan to color this, possibly. Though, I do also like it in black and white, since I tried to show a difference of the two mice this way. Minnie inked and solid, while Mickey remains in pencil and easily translucent
I'd like to write what's happening too, if I could actually stay focused enough. I'll try though.
Here's an idea though:

What's basically going on is this is later in their time of knowing each other. And, probably after having some discussion or something, Mickey's mind came to wonder what it was like to touch.

After so many year-- decades?-- one probably forgets exactly what it's like. To know the warmth it sends through your fingers and into your whole body.

Mickey has, of course, touched or tried touching Minnie many times(many of which to her dismay-- and secret delight[not as naughty as I just made it sound]) and his lack of temperature has sent cold shivers up her spine. However, as they talked more-- probably about the feeling of warmth, touch, such senses—and he approached her more to see if, just maybe, he could feel it all again, for once she was freely allowing him.

As he brought his hands to her face, the chills were all there. He was so cold. A solid presence of icy air cupping her head. And he could tell, but something in him so badly wanted to feel her warmth. To hold her close. And looking at her… He wanted her. Even his tail wrapped around her, wanting to keep her in his presence, hoping to not only gather her warmth but give her some in return.

That’s mainly the idea I have so far with this picture. The organization of it all is all over the place, so hopefully I can think of something...
*cue kiss the girl*

Still so tempted for this moment to call for the “can I keep you?” line. YOU CANT DENY IT’S A PERFECT MOMENT FOR IT. *shot* I WILL NEVER BE OVER IT.
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Chibiprincess1569 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE THIS <3 Ahaha that's so cute
hypermegatailsfan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The pic is lovely, I like the idea of keeping Minnie inked while Mickey is in pencil to highlight their differences. It's a great artistic choice. The expressions are so sweet and tender, it's like that moment when you're waiting for the couple to kiss but you know someone's gunna interrupt it. Again really liking what you choose to do with Mickey's tail, is a delicious kind of possession while still very romantic. I also enjoyed reading more about this 'verse you've cooked up, the lines about heat and cold were great. I think the mice allow the exception of that line ;)
GodShinyn300 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
How cute, reminds me of Casper and Kat
shadow4everandaday Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this idea! It's terribly cute.
RainbowPonyFairy Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hexterian Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011   Digital Artist
wait what
SonicHearts Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011   General Artist
Wait what, wat?
Just what wat?
What. *nod*
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June 25, 2011
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