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Yuki Mori - THANK YOU FOR 100K by Sonicbluespeed Yuki Mori - THANK YOU FOR 100K by Sonicbluespeed
Here is a piece of Yuki Mori from Space Battleship Yamato.

I did this as thanks for the goal of reaching 100k! Thank you guys for the continued support! Heart 


Comments appreciated!

Be sure to join my Patreon if you would like to show support and see extra content!

I will also be having a commission sale as a result of reaching 100k. Wink/Razz 
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:iconidleduck:
I really like your art, but there are two points, I think you could improve on.

first one: Light/Shadow
It looks like the light isn't really consistent. The shadows around belt buckle and at the sides of her legs look like the light comes straight from above while the shadow under her boobs are way to short for that.
Also I think it would look way bedder if the light would come more from one side so the surfaces wouldn't look that flat.

talking about surfaces, the second one:
I think you could add some more texture to you're surfaces. They all look pretty similar and too smooth.

And as a last point I personally don't like your color choices in that picture. Especially the yellow is a little bit to loud for my taste. And they remind me a bit of those 8-bit colors. But that is probably just a personal thing.
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:icondoller98-taka:
doller98-TAKA Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2018
so cute Yuki!
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:icondiegoutetsuma:
Diegoutetsuma Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome :D!!
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:iconjeffrey-dallas:
jeffrey-dallas Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2017
"Kodai-kun..." Heart 
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:iconsamuelleumas:
SamuelLeumas Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2017
Well doesn't she just look pretty.
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:iconemusnacks:
EmuSnacks Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
This is really good!
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:iconsonicbluespeed:
Sonicbluespeed Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconemusnacks:
EmuSnacks Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
You're Welcome!
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:icona3kitsune:
A3Kitsune Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2017
         Onigiri 
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:iconfantasyrebirth96:
FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017
Such a brilliant sight to see! Am loving your art style done here!
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:iconsonicbluespeed:
Sonicbluespeed Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks! glad you like it
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:iconfantasyrebirth96:
FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017
Oh your so truly welcome! I feel like I said this before but in the end it's a suggestion and I'm only trying to help. If it's not needed I won't give feedback unless it's nessacary. Would be so neat to see more dynamic scenes from you really. I'm learning myself really and well I've been looking into tutorials and such. Tips and Tricks: Action Scene Basics Seeing your fantastic art style and such, it'd be super cool and all^^

Know what I mean? Again it's a suggestion at the end of the day. Just keep doing what you've always been doing more than anything.
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:iconsonicbluespeed:
Sonicbluespeed Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
That's a pretty good suggestion, I could definitely do more dynamic pieces!
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:iconfantasyrebirth96:
FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017
 If I may give some more small advice. Try to focus on more shading. Like stuff like this. i.pinimg.com/originals/9d/47/7… or this
i.pinimg.com/236x/ae/dd/05/aed…

or screenshots that have better shading views too. Like here i.kinja-img.com/gawker-media/i… and here i.pinimg.com/originals/98/20/a… and here too manga.tokyo/wp-content/uploads… for examples~


Ah.....suggestions. Just suggestions really. Your doing great no joke~ Keep on working hard alright?
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:iconhachimakix23:
HachimakiX23 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Professional Artist
Heart U Heart 
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:iconyukinomemories:
YukinoMemories Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
I loved. this super sexy!
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:iconsonicbluespeed:
Sonicbluespeed Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! she is =P (Razz) 
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:icondergamer:
DerGamer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017
Cute pic of Yuki and congrats for reaching 100k! Clap 
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:iconsonicbluespeed:
Sonicbluespeed Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for the support like always! Nod 
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:icondergamer:
DerGamer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017
^_^
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