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DAO: The Hahrens Quest chp.3 pg.1

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Published: November 15, 2011
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I already said chapter 3 was due very soon, didn't I?

So here's the answer to the question "Who was the misterious hooded elf?".

Thedas is small as a handkerchief :P

CREDITS FOR CHAPTER 3 (work belong to her and is posted with permission)

- Lineart and color: :iconbukittyan:

CREDITS FOR ALL THE PROJECT:

- Script: :iconsoniacarreras:
- English review: :iconwirls: and :icontwilightlover28:
- Lettering, edition and backgrounds concept art: :iconabadir:
- Characters concept art: :iconnadiasama:
- Edition consultant: :iconcridhe:

<-- Chapter 2/Page 2 -->

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Yllwenn storyline so far:

Dragon Age Origins (Gameplay):
- Comic strips in English [link]
- Comic strips in Spanish [link]
- Hurt: [link]
- A dance of blades: [link]
- Maybe the last time: [link]

The Hahren's Quest (covers the period between Origins and Awakening):
- Prologue: [link]
- First chapter: [link]

Dragon Age: Awakening (gameplay):
- Epilogue: [link]

Seeds of Hope (covers the period after Witch Hunt, during Act 1 and 2 of DA2)
- Cover: [link]
- Prologue: [link]

Dragon Age 2 - Act 3 - In my mind


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Disclaimer:

This is a work for fun inspired on a character created on the Role Playing Computer Game Dragon Age Origins. The world, settings and most of the characters depicted here belong to Bioware. My vision of Yllwenn Tabris, though, is only mine, as it is the story I'm creating about her and some of the visions of the Lore I'm going to reflect in this story.

Text in the comic has been kindly reviewed by :iconwirls: and :icontwilightlover28:. All typos and mistakes, however, are mine, as well as the story itself. Text in the comments has not been reviewed and I apologize if my English tears your eyes out.

Thanks for all the support Yllwenn and me are receiving from all the Deviant Art community. I wouldn't be doing this if you weren't there!!!
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bukittyanProfessional Digital Artist
I want to give props to :iconabadir: for his great lettering job! It all looks so clear, clean and unobtrusive. I don't think I could have done as good a job lettering. :)
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
Yes, he's quite a professional ;). But your page has all the merit here! The light is fantastic and the expressions priceless!
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bukittyanProfessional Digital Artist
Aw, thanks. I'm just glad I could help. :D
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gwpeHobbyist General Artist
Yaaay!! I wasn't expecting an update so soon :la:
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
Because Bukittyan made her pages very soon. She's awesome!!! And she did such an amazing work!
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jactinglimProfessional General Artist
lol hot seat
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
Yes!! :D
Wirls's avatar
Awesome!

Just one thing, the text in the second last panel is missing a comma. It should be: "Heck, my friend, is much better at telling these stories.
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
Yay!

But I thought this one was ok? I mean, the one who is better at telling stories is his friend so no comma between subject and verb?
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Because you are detracting from the main sentence, it's like putting it in brackets, one on either side.

Exerpt from [link]

Use a comma to set off parenthetical elements, as in "The Founders Bridge, which spans the Connecticut River, is falling down." By "parenthetical element," we mean a part of a sentence that can be removed without changing the essential meaning of that sentence. The parenthetical element is sometimes called "added information." This is the most difficult rule in punctuation because it is sometimes unclear what is "added" or "parenthetical" and what is essential to the meaning of a sentence.

English grammar is a pain in the backside... :roll:
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emedemeProfessional Digital Artist
HALA!! QUE PRECIOSIDAD DE PAGINA!

Bueno espera. Primero....UPDATEEE! :la::la::la:

:iconbukittyan: Did a beautiful work on this!! The colours are just. woah! :wow: And I love Wynne's expression on the 4th panel! Smart mage : P
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bukittyanProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you! :D :hug:
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
XDDD

Clarooo!! Es que bukittyan se lo ha currado y la ha mandado muy pronto, adoro a esta mujer!

Le ha quedado ALUCINANTE!
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emedemeProfessional Digital Artist
ya te digo. Es que cuando lo vi estaba babeando con el color de las paredes y la atmosfera. Porque soy asi de tonta XD
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
LOL. Como yo cuando lloro con la escena de la lluvia en Bambi. No cuando matan a la madre, no. Cuando se empieza a mojar el bosque... esa belleza técnica. Soy así de rarita.
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emedemeProfessional Digital Artist
Es que esa escena es preciosa. Esa pelicula me parece un coñazo, pero babeo de lo lindo con lo fondos <3
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SoniaCarrerasHobbyist General Artist
A mi esa peli me gusta mucho a nivel técnico. La historia, meh... puro drama infantil. Aunque siempre me encantó Tambor. Pero la escena de las gotitas, ains!!! Me emociona y todo!
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