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Thorns

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I broke your heart
literally, all throughout this pavement
cold water drenched your corpse
and I already forgot your name,

My heart is of shame
but my mind barely remembers you
I wish I could
it makes me afraid everytime,

beating roses
but the roses have thorns
I had a thorn
I pulled it out
and it hurt
and I'll never forget
forget your name

beating roses
but the roses have thorns
I had a thorn
I pulled it out
and it hurt
and I'll never forget
forget your name

what was your name?

Crushed by a past
that wears hooves similar to mine
how can I trust my own self
when I don't know what makes me

I'm trying to do better
but my personalities disagree
they come and go as they please
I just want to die in peace

roses leaves her kin
but she left the thorns
And I took it from her
I kept her with me
as a daughter
and I'll never forget
forget her name

roses leaves her kin
but she left the thorns
And I took it from her
I kept her with me
as a daughter
and I'll never forget
forget her name

what was her name?

Tore you into two
your heart beating mane
turned into dust by my metal hooves
and I can't remember your name

While I'm torn into
something I want to be
and something I never should
what was I before?

holding a rose
I get pricked by the thorns
I left the splinters
pulled them out
didn't care
but I wouldn't forget
all that pain

holding a rose
I get pricked by the thorns
I left the splinters
pulled them out
didn't care
but I wouldn't forget
all that pain

why don't you
just make me forget
like you did to Scotch Tape
it was so easy
don't face the guilt
it's the easy way out
pulling those thorns
out of my fucking brain
so I don't have to remember
I'll always forget
I'll forget her name
but It will happen again
won't it?

Roses is dead
leaving those emotional thorns
I kept her, Thorn
pulled her away
made her safe
but I forgot,
forgot, who I was.

Roses is dead
leaving those emotional thorns
I kept her, Thorn
pulled her away
made her safe
she forgot,
forgot, who I was.

And I wish
I could forget,
I do, and I don't, Thorn,
pulled her apart
hurting both her and me
but I won't ever forget
forget, her name,
her name was,
it was,
what was,
what was it?

Don't you ever pull her away from me,
I'm afraid, I'll forget her....
PH LEVELS TOO HIGH, CAPTAIN. TOO MUCH READING.
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Lijiah's avatar
Oh god, Rampage :c
Ciao-Arrivederci's avatar
Beautifully written.
Somethingguy912's avatar
thank you. It's a FOE-related poem!
Ciao-Arrivederci's avatar
I figured it was one of them, by the "hooves" and the fact that those are the only times you tend to have a poem featuring a pony :P Quite well-done.
Somethingguy912's avatar
yes, and that it's not like I got someone killed and tried not to remember it but couldn't forget it.
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