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Eyes-Forward

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EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
DON'T LOOK
AT A FILLY'S BUTT
LIKE THAT!

EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
YOU GOT
TO LEARN WHAT IS
CALLED MATH!

EYES FORWARD
AND TO ME,
FOR I OVERSEE
YOUR ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIEND'S ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIENDS,
ARE THE ENEMY.

EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
YOU DON'T
WANT TO MISS
SOME RAT A TAT TAT!

EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
DON'T PRETEND
YOUR FEELINGS
ARE ALL A ACT!

SO EYES FORWARD
AND TO ME,
FOR I OVERSEE
YOUR ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIEND'S ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIENDS,
ARE THE ENEMY.

EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
I DON'T KNOW
HOW HIGH OR LOW
THE ENEMIES WILL ATTACK!

EYES FORWARD
MISS BLACKJACK!
I CAN'T SHOW
HOW TO OR FRO
THE ENEMY SHALL ACT!

SO EYES FORWARD
AND TO ME,
FOR I SEE
YOUR DISPOSITION TO THEE,
FRIENDS AND ENEMIES,
YOU CANT HAVE FRIENDS,
WITHOUT HAVING ENEMIES!

EYES FORWARD
MISS SPARKLE!
WHEN WILL
YOU LEARN ANOTHER
LESSON TODAY?

EYES FORWARD
SPARKLE!
RED IS DEAD
YELLOW IS MELLOW
ALL YOU CAN SAY!

CHECK YOUR EYES FORWARD
TO ME,
FOR I KNOW
YOUR ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIEND'S ENEMIES,
AND YOUR FRIENDS,
ARE THE ENEMY.

EYES FORWARD
MISS SPARKLE!
YOU NEVER KNOW
IF TOMORROW
IS THE LAST DAY!

EYES FORWARD
SPARKLE!
I CAN NOT SHOW
YOU THE ANSWERS
TO A BETTER DAY!

BETTER KEEP EYES FORWARD
ON ME,
FOR I KNOW
YOUR ENEMIES,
YOUR FRIEND'S ENEMIES,
AND YOUR FRIENDS,
ARE THE ENEMY.

EYES FORWARD
ON THEE,
THE QUEEN OF STARS,
THE REAPER OF ETERNITIES,
PAINTING ENEMIES RED
AND CHURNING STOMACHS YELLOW,
EVERYONE CAN BE AN ENEMY.

EYES FORWARD
HAIL TO THE QUEEN,
MAIDEN OF DEATH
CHAMPION OF GENEROSITY,
BLUSHING FRIEND'S RED
SCARING ENEMIES TO YELLOW,
YOU DON'T HAVE TO BE THE ENEMY.

whether it be,
enemies,
friend's enemies,
friends.
so I was attempting to write this two weeks ago, but the writing was so horrible that I knew that I wasn't quite inspired to write it. Now I am, and it's pretty cool. Cover on the way, I already got a great idea for it!
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EbonyPegasus's avatar
hey there you asked what I liked about this so here goes. I like the short sentences of it. Gives it a real fast paced and urgent feel just like you would expect from the eyes forward Sparkle. a sense of danger and readiness. I love Fallout Equestria and Blackjack and yeah I like how this captures the feel of how she has to always be so aware of her surroundings. I also liked the repetitive nature of it since that is exactly what I would expect Blackjack to do. Keep checking eyes forward sparkle and getting various readings that she would interpret. It has a nice rhythm to it as is easy to read. Could almost be a chant. ~ Dashz
Somethingguy912's avatar
once again, thanks for your input! I hope you get a chance to read all of the PH poems I have made so far!
TrainDodger's avatar
Yes, but what about her frenemies? :D (Big Grin) 
Somethingguy912's avatar
aw, crap. now I gotta edit the whole thing. :3