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Silver Legacy Doujinghi page 3

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*EDIT 1.2.15* redrew/fixing the panels for my doujinshi moonlight legend vol 1 ( it will contain ch 1-4). 
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page 3!!

I'm still experimenting with the different tones...do you guys like it better like this or...more paint like?

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Goodness, this former life of Sailor Moon seems very different than the one we know...she's so graceful (Sorry, sweetie) and so composed. She and her mother are exquisite, like everything else in this story. And we're just a few pages in! :iconenchanted-dreams: :iconhypervyper42:
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thanks! im really loving your comments lol.
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Demande La EmoticonBeating hearts Cosmos La Emoticon Only in my dreams...*Sighs* Still, happy you're liking the comments! Lol, you got mad skills. Circus ball project entry

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Kibate's avatar
i would say the paint one
if it were printed it would be a different story, but for online viewing the paint style is really better
SoLoretta's avatar
thanks! I'll probably have to reference you alot since your soo good at drawing fighting scenes a skill i terribly lack!
Kibate's avatar
everyone got something that he is good at(though i would recommend you to look at professionel shonen manga for refrence XP)
i totally admire your faces
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thanks that means alottttt coming from you! I most definitely will when the time comes hehe which will be soon..
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She is very brave!
AprilGreen's avatar
As always, good artwork, but I think you use too many different styles of tones. I can´t say any more than that, because I draw my own stuff still analogue (= by hand -> dinasaur ^^;), but maybe you could still improve this.
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yea it was my first attempt to use the program..still experimenting
AprilGreen's avatar
Just keep going! You really can´t go anything wrong as long as we get more pages to read! ^__^
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haha ahh thanks alot!
midnitedying's avatar
I definitely stay stick to the paint look you were getting before, it was what originally drew me to your works :D
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ahh thanks!!! I'll keep that in mind.
I like your art and the storyline. I can't wait to see the next page.

One little thing: it should be "their smiling faces," not "they're."
SoLoretta's avatar
ahh fucker thanks for catching that.. english was never my strong point
Hey, drawing isn't my strong point, so I had to resort to English. :sheepish:
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haha you should be my editor then.
Linesa's avatar
Great !
I love your work and your story ^^
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thank you! that means alot to me!
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