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I wake up in a garden,
The garden dances to the breeze,
The breeze plays its fine tune,
To hear it, to see it, it was life,
I never felt so alive in such a world,

This breezy hill, away from all troubles,
For I could sit here and enjoy it forever,
In this garden, thou could forget time,
Leave time, this is a world in a forever moment,
This just moment for I could only see it,

These flowers too, they all played along,
I smiled a smile that returned,
I felt home, this garden of vast color,
To say beautiful that it was much more of,
Almost driven speechless to describe it all,
Yet, I knew there was some word for it,
Words are words, to see it was more descriptive,

The garden spoke, for it was dulcet with each word,
Each word it spoke, the flowers said of a panacea garden,
Emotions were set equal to the color of a place,
The garden would always glow of its fine green that sparkled,
The flowers would grip me without an injury,

It was a place of joy, even the dead danced along,
Everybody could be here at peace, I was thankful of that,
I always look to this green garden, dream or not,
This garden was a piece of my life, I did not trash it,

That was a mere lifetime ago I went at first,
I still go, I am a just spirit that will be me,
I run and run in this garden for what the world gives me,
This garden is a memory-a symbol, a true love,
Let this garden live on with me, for my blood is part of it
Just a poem I wanted to do for :iconxy-a-z-z:. She also helped give me an idea for it.
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elezya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
wow i didn't know you had a such beautiful talent for poetry!
its so sweet ^^
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SoftDiamond Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
^^ thnx
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HBird113 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel odd saying trendy things like this, but your poetry game is on point XD
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SoftDiamond Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much. There is no need to feel odd because of that by the way ^^.
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xY-a-z-z Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
omg this is awesome!! 8DDDDD
I love it! your writing is great! :D
thanks!!! x333
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SoftDiamond Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:D. Thanks and no problem :D
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