Corrected B&W version of [link]
(as corrected as I could get it, anyway).
Fixed: cheekbones in somewhat better place, neck shortened (I know she's a fantasy elf, but that doesn't make her part-giraffe!), design on breastplate slightly more aligned, shoulder pauldrons of similar size, and lowered the cloth wrinkle on her neck to where it *should* be.
I mean, I know it was just a 5-minute sketch with no penciling beforehand and all that, but...it was just...BOTHERING ME. I may recolor this at some point, just for more practice. But at least it won't bug me so much to look at now.