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Comparison 2: 2010 by socks4615 Comparison 2: 2010 by socks4615
Same characters as Comparison 1, drawn today. This took me a couple of hours if you count the shading, scanning & clean-up. As with the previous piece, pencils on smudge-prone sketchpad paper; thus, Photoshop used to clean up smudges and add text (though I didn't bother handwriting anything this time).

I toyed with inking it, since I have the capability now. I probably drew Comparison 1 while I was goofing off at work. And it's interesting to see what's improved in the last 6 years, even though I haven't practiced much (if at all) and I still have no formal training.

I still can't draw hands or feet/shoes worth a damn (esp. bad since I just got done with a stint as a shoe salesclerk), and I think Rav doesn't look like she's leaning against him as much in this pic. Also, I failed at drawing smirking today; she should be.

I'm really unhappy with Stave's face, but at least he and Rav look *different* from each other now, which they should - they're from different planets (though each are essentially human).

Also, yes, outfits are different. My concept of the characters changed, so there you go. I also decided to change the pose. Rav looks more innocent than she probably should, but then again, I could see her playing people with her sweet-looking countenance, so they don't see the laser gun pointed at their stomach.

As with Comparison 1, these are my original characters from a story that we'll just call space fantasy and leave at that (there're even elves! Sort of. Tenor doesn't like being called a "space elf" though).
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manderina Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Lots of improvement! :heart: If you keep drawing, it just gets better. Truefax.
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socks4615 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
yeah but if anything's going to improve, I'd hope it'd be my *writing*...
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