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The Paranoid Huntress

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She knows where she's going and what's planned, a date with destiny and a murderous traitor awaits. Flying through the sky on a chord of her alien costume, Donna Diego's heart races in anticipation of this hunt's climax.
Clambering through the abandoned factory, Scream tastes the dust in the air, following the almost inaudible patter of her quarry, as loud as a siren to her honed senses. 'This is the place.' She tells her Other who mentally nods in agreement.
She's seen this, run every possible outcome through her unstable, paranoid mind a million times. His heart is racing, his breath is heavy and his muffled footfalls are as clumsy as an Elephant's: Scream knows everything about him even with her back turned. She feels the warmth of the superheated blade on her hair tendrils as they reach out to snare him in the darkness, he's lunging, aiming at her with all the relative speed of a tortoise to the lightning. She could dodge, maybe backflip clean over him, turn and break his arm perhaps? She's in no danger against a mere human being such as this and she knows it.
A swat of livid locks and a tangle of razor-sharp sentient wires catch the drearily slow human off guard; that he actually thought he could sneak up on her makes Donna chortle beneath her living suit. For a split second as she begins to bind him in her living hair, she wonders how he can live on, seperated from his Other, one he's spent even longer with than she has her own!
"Mr. Brock, it's been a while!" She goads, tightening her prehensile curls until the squishy meat of his muscular form begins to bulge as if about to burst. "And YOU of all people trying to tempt Symbiotes to their demise! We ARE disappointed!" She's angry now, maybe it would be best if she just squeezed a little harder, plastered him over the walls... Just as she could have done when she first had this man entangled in her living hair; Maybe - just maybe - she thinks: if she'd done it there and then, poor sickly Scott Washington would still be alive now.
She examines the weapon he imagined was capable of killing her too: "A warm knife? Really?!" She laughs aloud, "You were going to try and kill US with a temperate piece of cutlery?!" She imagines how the split second recoil such a thing could have caused the Hybrid Symbiotes would have left Scott vulnerable to the outside world; it was a miracle she'd taken strength in that he'd even been alive at all.
"Let us show you what little good this thing would have done you against US!" Without a thought in the world, Donna willfully jams the 300 degree chef's knife deep into her abdomen. A hiss escapes her fangs to match the escaping vapour around the blade; her Other has split, but her years with it pumping through her veins have pushed her healing metabolism to incredible limits: for every cell that pops in the sweltering heat another divides to replace it. The warmth of the smouldering metal swiftly dissapates through her flesh as she slowly, calmly withdraws it at a steady room temperature.
"Mmm-" Donna sighs as the golden Other instantly slithers back into her capillaries to finish the healing process. "You see, Mr. Brock? Your previous victim was the sickliest and weakest of all possible Symbiotes and you'll find us..." Taking the middle of the blade in the palm of her hand she clenches, bending and warping the tempered steel for the split second it takes to shatter. "-A MUCH nastier proposition!"
The still struggling and squirming male in her clunches tenses up as his body is wracked with agony from a gentle squeeze; he fights it for a moment, but falls limp and heavy as a single filament of Scream's hair throttles him unconscious. Donna, victorious and impassioned takes to thinking what she's going to do to this hateful creature, her Other abuzz with all manner of grotesquery she momentarily revels in; If nothing else - she thinks - at least her burgeoning family of followers will enjoy a healthy meal... once she's had her fun that is.


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Yeah, we're revisiting this; As I've said before, the "Canon" I'm correcting here was the moment I swore to never buy anything from Marvel again so this is just a(nother) therapy thing I guess; rewriting dog-shit to my own wanky preferences kinda thing. Renders and a short story so hopefully there's something for everyone, lemme know what you think if you're so inclined; I appreciate the view, peace! <3
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AlexBaxtheDarkSide's avatar
done a great job here! scream looks great!
SmoothlyDoesItFreely's avatar
Cheers, appreciate it :)

Edit: Oh and thanks for the Llama :P
la-Noob's avatar
I seriously love your fiction. I really wish you'd come back to the Titania story but hey if the muse aint that way it aint that way 
SmoothlyDoesItFreely's avatar
Thankyou, I appreciate it. It's often not a muse thing as a motivation and distraction thing; I'm quite scatterbrained when it comes to getting stuff out and lose track of my thought processes halfway through each job, so a couple days' work from A to B becomes months of work from A to Z through every letter in between lol.
la-Noob's avatar
I can appreciate that, so many other things going on it makes it challenging for sure. I really need to get back to updating and making new chapters for my symbiote addventure on Superstories but life gets in the way between work and school its a great time. 

Its still nice from time to time to go back and read that one I love the way you had her craft her look I really wish more creators would focus in on that aspect of it the mental transformation and embrace of the monstrous side of the symbiote and having the protagonist take it all in and revel in the vanity of it all
AAGGRESSS's avatar
I feel you bro.

If it makes you feel better in response to that and what happened to hybrid I more or less made my own batch of symbiotes in my comic series. (tho mine are nano tech goo)
SmoothlyDoesItFreely's avatar
Thanks bud, glad it ain't just me :D I'll dive on in and check your stuff out
AAGGRESSS's avatar
wow, awesome! thank you! Also nice comic.
bambucea09's avatar
what do you use to do all these great stuff?
SmoothlyDoesItFreely's avatar
I Use Daz Studio www.daz3d.com and the Victoria 4 model (Because I'm too poor for newer models) The hair I bought from Renderosity.com and then just a bunch of practise, made the skins, morphs etc. to make her look like scream :) Get daz and have a go, I can always hook you up with some textures and stuff if need be ;)
bambucea09's avatar
awesome! I will really love to learn to do stuff like that! There are all free, all the stuff I need?
SmoothlyDoesItFreely's avatar
Daz itself is free and comes with a bunch of stuff to get started with. For more free stuff I generally use www.sharecg.com/poser  and www.renderosity.com/mod/freest…
bambucea09's avatar
I know I had tried the program but I never understand it how it works...could you maybe...just if you can of course...to make a video tutorial for me?
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youtu.be/yRW3MdwO9Fw < Sickleyield is great, she makes pro quality stuff for sale on renderosity etc. and she's got absolutely tons of tutorials to help you on your way. She does a far better job than I could do ;)
bambucea09's avatar
I have a problem which I forget about it...why is Daz using my CPU instead of GPU? I have a gtx 1070
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As I'm laptop bound I'm not the best to talk about making the most of graphucs cards, but if you find render settings, at the top of that window it will open up the option for various render engines; your card should allow you to use the inbuilt inbiased render engine (iray) that my laptop just can't handle. I'd think within the settings you should be able to do something about sharing processing power for your main posing window, but they are high poly models so the cpu's gonna have to work either way i'd think
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Thanks I would look on it right now
bambucea09's avatar
Awesome! Scream doesn't look here so fucking skinny! Thank you!
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