Hi again. I recently wrote a story that is intended to hypnotise the reader and was wondering if I might get some feedback from you since you seem to be doing a lot of similar stories. The story I wrote is for women and takes them through an erotic encounter with a hypno-snake. If that's not something you'd want to read that's fine. I just wanted to ask because you seem to have some experience with this kind of writing. Again it is very erotic and for women so if that's not for you don't feel pressured to read it, but I would appreciate the feedback.
(the story is called erotic hypnosis for women and is in my gallery hypnotising you)
Hi! I'm new to deviant art and am going to be posting pretty much purely literature. I like the writing you have done on here. Do you have any tips on how to make better posts or how to get my name out? I'm just starting to write and I want to get some feedback so I can improve.
The best thing you can do is when you post something make sure you load up the tags area of the post with as much as is relevant, so like for me I go in and type in "hypno" and see what pops up and select the ones that apply, then i do mindcontrol, etc etc, the more relevant tags you get the more it will pop up in random searches. Other then that, there are some groups you could join that will post your stories to the group or let you add them to the group page so people that don't follow you can see them but I don't honestly do that anymore as deviant changed how they work and i'm too lazy to go through the trouble of figuring it out. If your stories fall under the umbrella of "mind control" you can submit them to mcstories.com and leave a link on the bottom to your deviant art page. After that its honestly just time and patience.
hope that helps.