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Assassin guy by sk8erkiller900 Assassin guy by sk8erkiller900
He may appear stiff, but that knife can be through your jugular in seconds.
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IchiTheKuudere Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Student General Artist
Hi. I'd like to give you some helpful criticism! For starters, while the proportions seem to be taking shape, some things seem off, like the extremely large arms, and then how there's no defining lines for the cloth on the legs ruffling in the supposed wind. Another thing to think about is which way the wind is going. You seem to contradict the direction with the hair, and then the clothes. The hair is blowing right, while the clothes are blowing left. I also can't really tell where his nose is, and more just see a snout. He also doesn't seem to have a mouth, more just an indent. When drawing a mouth, you kinda wanna hint it. More details would definitely help this drawing, and maybe cropping the drawing would help. I would like to see how you improve. 。^‿^。
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sk8erkiller900 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks man, however this was a small drawing where I don't pay too much attention to detail (reason as to why it's in a notebook). As for the hair, the hat is pressing it into a set position, the arms only go to the waist, I didn't put much effort in the face, and he's wearing a coat (which explains lack of definition between upper and lower clothing.)
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Alco
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RCT6303W87DK
Shutter Speed
70000/1000000 second
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F/2.8
Focal Length
4 mm
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319
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Jan 4, 2017, 10:28:53 PM
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