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SJPenner

Wander in my wor(l)ds with me.
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Artist // Student // Digital Art
  • Oct 25
  • United States
  • Deviant for 14 years
  • sjpenner.com
  • She / Her
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Favourite Movies
Star Trek
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
A Fine Frenzy, Ahn Trio, Stephen Swartz
Favourite Writers
Niel Gaimon, Terry Pratchet, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, Tamora Pierce, Mercedes Lackey
Favourite Gaming Platform
XBox
Tools of the Trade
Markers, pencil, photoshop, Intuis tablet, Mouse
Other Interests
Music, drawing, and writing

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Thanks! I will keep your notes in mind when I come back to this page when it actually comes up in the comic!
Are you Coming?
Thanks for the critique:)
Journal Girl
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like this photo!

It is extremely simple, but effective. My eyes are drawn along the lines of the jacket to the dark umbrella. The contrast is very effective.
I also love where the clouds are sitting, to fill in the negative space around the figure.

The only thing I don't like (and to be honest I wouldn't know how to fix) is the level of blur on the water and rocks at the bottom. I find it distracting, and that my eyes almost 'fall' off the edge of the photo when they reach it.

I think, if I had done it, I would have cropper them right out, but then you wouldn't have the nice framing effect you have right now...I'm not sure.

Overall, well done!
Waiting On My Rain
Not a problem:) If you take a quick peak in my traditional gallery, you can see the huuuuge difference that charcoal makes with shadows. I hated it all threw high school then in university I realized how awesome it is! My last piece in pencil ended up being digitized cause it was just...bah:P
Happy Sweet 16 Kassie