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Sniper by sixpathsoffriendship Sniper by sixpathsoffriendship
Halloween costume :3 


Art © sixpathoffriendship
Characters 
© Me (crossover)
Characters ''Quiet'' © Hideo Kojima 
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:iconpabloracer1:
Overall the picture looks good and it seems that the pose of her gives good support to the sniper rifle, the details on the ground and the background are well made too and it does seem that you spent some time trying to get some good angles here too so that's something good, that being said, the shading of this picture might use some work like the shadow projection and, likewise, light projection too since it gives me the feel that the light comes from one point, though the shine reflected on her body gives the slight idea that the light comes from other sources, like so, the shadows (specially on her left leg) aren't properly or entirely projected, in the way that you didn't shadowed the ground like you did with her right leg.

Now this is just me being picky, but i always tend to check on the mechanism of the gun being drawn, in this case, the sniper rifle is lacking some details on it, like the bolt to get the new round on the chamber, the magazine (or clip in some cases like the m1 garand among other sniper rifles) and the hand supporting the rifle is a bit off the wooden part to support the rifle itself.

That being said, i still like a lot the pose you've chosen for this piece of art and the picture overall, so please don't take my words too harshly, if you want, i would gladly help you with some of the details i mentioned on this critique earlier and maybe learn something new together, hope you have a good day ^^
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killhunter651 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what kind of sniper is that? Dragonof
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:iconponysoldier12:
ponysoldier12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015  Student Artist
*wingboner and nosebleed* Heart Heart  uhh me likes~ Heart Heart Heart 
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BronyBallistics3 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh dayum!!

Best. Pose. And. Type. Of. Weapon. EVAH.
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:iconbronyballistics3:
BronyBallistics3 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You know wat?

1v1 Quickscope 420 REKT FaZe FNAFBs Me vs. You Quickscoping to the DEATH!!!
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renacer87 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015  Student
Seguro que con esa arma me mata, pero solo me vasta ver sus ojos para rendirme ante ella :heart: Excelente trabajo :)
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A--C-Y-N-I-C-D-O-L-L Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
She breathes through her skin.
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apagan0075x Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015
She better be careful because of Buttsecks spies. XD
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:iconallfather-vohas:
Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Remember Sleepy~... Be... QUIET. :trollface:
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:iconsalvidin:
Salvidin Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015
Christina challenges Sleepy to sniper fight! >:3
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:iconsixpathsoffriendship:
sixpathsoffriendship Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nuuu ;-; kiss fight ;3;
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:iconsalvidin:
Salvidin Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015
hihi x3
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:iconninjaheart:
NinjaHeart Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015
A sniper needs to stay Quiet :P
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:iconbalanced-wolf:
Balanced-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome. reat pose, lots of shiny effects, proportions feel just right. Good art overall <3
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:iconleloup144:
leloup144 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Thank you<3
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Goldham92 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
very lovely
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:icondemon8eye:
DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^__^ oh wouldn't mind that outfit
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:icontheheadcrusher6:
Theheadcrusher6 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 11, 2015   General Artist
snipers a good job mate *insert tf2 roleplay*
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:iconkindlyviolence:
KindlyViolence Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
nice work
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:iconwanderer619:
Wanderer619 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Fantastic :)
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:iconcracker3011:
Cracker3011 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Spread eagle while sniping motherfuckers, nice XP
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LoveForLetty64 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Snake: "Begin cover fire!"
Sleepy: "Hmph...."

Despues de tantos disparos y lamentos....
"Outpost captured.." 

Esta fantastico! :D
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:icongoldwing93:
Goldwing93 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Que lindo sombreado aplicaste c:
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:iconaj0joe:
aj0joe Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Preciosa y letal
:iconvinylnosebleed:
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is that from Metal gear or something?
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:iconquinoproductions:
quinoproductions Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
QUIET!!!!!!!!!!!  GIF Steven Universe - So Cute! 
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:iconmrmaclicious:
MrMaclicious Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sniped by sexy XD
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:iconprotector96:
protector96 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Hehe I like the weapon choice
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
GRANdiosa :D
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:iconb133d4u:
b133d4u Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Why are ripped leggings so fucking hot?
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:iconwithinsouls:
WithinSouls Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
SnIp-ER!! Oh Noes!  but still awesome Halloween costume Meow :3  
Happy Halloween!
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:iconequestianracer:
EquestianRacer Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Battle driven
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dankoopa1 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Goold ol quiet 
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:icondekra234:
Dekra234 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
sweet
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:iconringoffirexl200:
RingOfFireXL200 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
"Not a crazed gunmare."
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:iconpabloracer1:
Pabloracer1 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"she's an assassin"  i see what you did there :3
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Iced-Equestria Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Shhhh be quiet.... X3
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:iconbobbyv94:
bobbyv94 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
One shot one kill
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Mane-Shaker Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
those ripped pants. <3
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