I do like how poetic this feels from the structure and the simplicity of it all, and yet... it's still quite profound, I find.
The text is a bit too small, and I'm not sure if the colour works.. I do like the black on white/grey, but the "to you" part could be lighter, if you get where I'm coming from?
It feels a bit odd if you compare the size of what surrounds the words to the words themselves.. I'd suggest a bigger size, but eh.
Lovely stuff, regardless.