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The Ultimate Arte Page 4 Fixed by SiverCat The Ultimate Arte Page 4 Fixed by SiverCat
Page 4 for The Ultimate Arte.

Panel 4 took way too long. I've never done glowing objects before. Thank you once more *Primantis for linking me to the tutorial. I messed it up a couple of times and spent a lot of time experimenting to get the effect I wanted, but I'm pretty happy with the results.

Edit: The writing was too hard to read to before, so I changed it. Something I should have done in the first place ^^;

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Jade, Peony, Pacman copyrighted to Namco.
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nOLiVEking Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Good but the first panel is a little hard to read but other than that really good.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
Yeah, I know. I need to figure out a way to fix that first panel >.< Thank you.
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nOLiVEking Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah No problem I'd say try to get a font that can have a shadow or 1 that can have 2 colours if thats even possible.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
I could try doing a drop shadow. I'll take another look at that page and see if I can figure out a good way to make that panel more readable.
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CountChristoph Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010   Writer
This has been an amusing read, I daresay, though 'stormcloud' is often seen written as one word.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
I copied the incantation right from the game and that was how it was. Thanks.
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CountChristoph Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010   Writer
Oh, well, alright.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
Well, regardless. I'm not going to go in just to change it if it is wrong. Although I'd like to fix that first panel's text...But this will be the third time submitting it...
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CountChristoph Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010   Writer
Oh, well pardon me, and forget I ever said a thing about it.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
Don't worry about it! I'm not trying to be snippy. Really, I'm sighing at myself.
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CountChristoph Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010   Writer
Oh...

*sigh of relief*

Pardon me for thinking so.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist
Sorry for seeming snippy or annoyed.
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