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The Swamp Witch Page 8 by SiverCat The Swamp Witch Page 8 by SiverCat
Another page at last. I am sorry for the almost month delay. I have been swamped with school work.

I experimented a bit with the layout of the bottom panels. Hoping it works.

I'm now using InDesign for layout, which makes things a little easier. Keep trying to find little ways to speed up my process. :)
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Kataclysme Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"Such a naughty tongue on a handsome boy" :D
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist
He's such a handsome hero, he even attracts the ugly mean old witches ;) or she's just creepy lol.
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Kataclysme Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe First thing I thought of when reading that line was "Creeper!"
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist
Though really she may just be thinking "delicious!" Which you can take in anyway you choose :XD:
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Kataclysme Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: Well as a swamp witch I cant believe she's dating much lol
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist
Not a lot of prospects...Unless you like frogs or toads and they have this nasty habit of turning into princes when kissed. Not something she wants! :lol:
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Kataclysme Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Or not something she wants anyone else to know she wants ;)
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist
:giggle: Yesss
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daddysir Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh you know I'm a fan of being so fast (or talented) that you can't even see them move until they are right on top of you. It's a big shockaroo!

No real way to speed up the process besides making a stick figure thumbnail first. That way you'll know how it's supposed to look (though it still might change on the way from your brain to the paper. I know it changes with me).

The bottom panels do work and work well. If I had to say anything, you might move Rhett till he's at the border as it's dead space. No art or dialog there. That way you can show off a bit more of the Swamp Witch. Still, as a matter of Panel Progression, it works! It tells a story! And that is what you succeeded at doing.
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist
There's little things though. It's easier to layout in InDesign than trying to in Paint Shop Pro and faster. Still tricky though.

I had trouble with getting an angle on that last panel. Though now that you mention it, I could have just taken the whole group of them and dialogue and just shoved them over...

Thank you for commenting as always!
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daddysir Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student General Artist
If you're just talking about the final panel, that's exactly what I meant. You want that in between panel to keep the eyes moving and for better dramatic effect, even in a fun page. By the way, isn't it something that you can be funny and humorous on one page and then just a page later, things get deadly serious?

My pleasure to comment!!
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist
I'll go check and experiment a bit more. I think it should work fine!

I love when things can transition from one mood to another smoothly. The key is to avoid jarring.
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RukiRisa-chan Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
0____0 No! Rhett!

Ah, and where did Mathias go?
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist
Rhett's just not allowed to have a moment of glory lol.
Mathias is still trapped, just not in view. AH! I want to work on the next page badly...but homework :'(
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RukiRisa-chan Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, the fate of a companion.

>w< And the next pages are good~
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SiverCat Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist
It's always rough.:D

Thank you!
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RukiRisa-chan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't it though?

And you're welcome for the non-constructive comment XD
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