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I like the contrast in colours. The red berry in front of the green background is pretty nice.

But to me the focus should be at the berry, not on the twig.
And the twig itself appears a little over-exposed. Did you use the internal flash of your camera?

Maybe it would look better if the berry would be in the center of the picture but hmm, I'm not sure about that. (Just to get closer to the required 100 words... Why don't you try to cut a little below the berry and a litte of the right side to get the berry centered?)

/Stefan
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kaya01 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
šta je to mala trešnjica? super si ovo odradio :D
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siscanin Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
Ma neka boba ali učinila mi se zanimljiva i eto je tu :) Hvala ti za :+fav:
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kaya01 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
nema na čemu :D jako mi se sviđa ovo :D
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siscanin Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
Ipak hvala lipa kayo:D
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getcarter Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009   Photographer
very nice, but the wood is a bit overexposed
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siscanin Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
Thank so much my friend:)
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OLYMPUS
Model
E-510
Shutter Speed
1/180 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
150 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Apr 4, 2009, 3:42:16 PM

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