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hmmmm I think the assessment seems fair to me from =tdwebb , though the rule of thirds I am not sure about with what he said. It doesn't follow that BUT it certainly does follow the Golden Section which IMO is much better and stronger than the rule of thirds. It is almost an exact 60/40 split when you look at the tree on the left, but I do understand what he is saying as well, I think the foreground in this shot plays with that composition a lot and I fully agree, it should be lighter. It is certainly a good case right there for Grad NDs/HDR/exposure blending, if there ever was one.

Overall it is a good shot, I think with some tweaking you can actually make it really pop though, minor stuff really with curves and levels. I would also make your border much smaller for this shot.

Nice work overall.
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roccothe Featured By Owner May 10, 2009   Photographer
lijepe boje...jabih samo cucnuo da naglasin siluetu drveta
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siscanin Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
E bilo je na brzaka ima nedostataka ali eto:D
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5iM0N Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like it, but some suggestions:

1.The picture would look better without the tree on the left, maybe one step to the right would have done better in this case.

2. The foreground is far to dark! I don't know if you shot in RAW, but if so try to open the picture twice and one time boost exposure so that the foreground looks brighter. Then combine the dark and the light layer...hope you understand what I'm trying to say.

3. Personally I think the fence in the foreground is very distracting. Try to get behind that fence :)

Posted this here, because I am no subscriber and cannot write critiques. But because you requested critique I thought I'll do it this way.

Cheers
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siscanin Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
I am aware that this photograph has shortcomings, and I will try to fix it thanks to the criticism.
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5iM0N Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome :)
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carrolsmith Featured By Owner May 9, 2009   Photographer
Lijepi pastelni tonovi.
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siscanin Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
Hvala Karolina!
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carrolsmith Featured By Owner May 9, 2009   Photographer
:D
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siscanin Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
:hug:
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