The story is related to the comic "Curious Kia"
Kia was in the Oni jungle to look for deep swamps, where she could film herself with her camera, how she sinks into the mud of the swamp and played sinking.
After she had a few disappointments behind her, she finally found a large marsh, which looked deep enough to film a dramatic sinking scene.
Her heart began to pound with excitement while she set up her camera and focused it up on the marsh
Without a second thought, she jumped into the mud that churned then began to bubble.
She slid slowly up over her knees into it.
But when she could then feel no solid ground, she became nervous and tried to get out of the mud again, but it clung with an iron grip tightly to her legs and don't want to let her go so easily.
After some desperate but completely futile rescue attempts, the sheer terror spread in her face.
She hadn't expected that she could really stuck tight in this moor-like mire, and that a Swamp could be so deep that she couldn't get rid of it.
What should she do now? If she don't quickly come up with something, the girl will find out very soon how deep this swamp really is!
Should she sink, or be rescued by you? You Decide!
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I hope you like it!
I agree with kudos expressed so far.
It's beautiful mud, perfect with its behavior in your narrative. Nice bubble bursts. Sink entry roil-wreaths often really do have a different color than that of the surrounding, undisturbed bog.
I also love how the clawing/clutching and perspective of her hands contributes so much to her entry into 'frantic city'. It's an excellent depth at which to realize you are deep; you look down and your legs are very short. Maybe someone will see her purple hair, though.
Your shadow work on Kia is very fine.