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Blanket toss by Sinister-Starfeesh Blanket toss by Sinister-Starfeesh
I'm not happy with this :no:

But woot i finally got an idea i haven't seen before x.X
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Critique by Spirit-The-Hedgehogg Apr 22, 2009, 3:27:55 AM
Ok. I first time give critique so sorry if I make something bad. So. Its very lovely pic. Shadows, colors and emoticons looks great. I don't know why u don't very like it. Eh. Lots of artist don't like they're artworks, so don't be afraid. :) I don't see here anythinkg bad. Maybe one think. That emots who take that.... SOMETHING xD must be practise. I say about the animation. I see, you must make that with heart, becouse it looks amazing. I just hope, ur next artwork will be like that! Big, big, big cheers for you. Maybe another people like that, too. :)
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SpeedyBlueDemon Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
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Vloxica Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
o-o um... i have one thing to say...
YOLO BITCHES I AINT AFRAID OF NO BLOODY GHOST!!!!
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SpeedyBlueDemon Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
K.
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SparkelzDaCat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Cool! I love it!
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Oktanas Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Helo there,

Just wanted to tell you that I have featured your work on my journal, shoutboard and feature box on my main page [link]

Have a good day.
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome ^^ :hug:
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The-Fun-Group Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
:XD: This emoticon is hilarious. I would love to have you as a member of my club. It's all about funny stuff like this.

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LeoLeonardo Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
Really nicely animated. :nod: But! You should make the bouncing one fly higher. :giggle:
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Aye i was thinking he doesn't jump high enough :<
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sparxle Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009   Digital Artist
it's cute! but there should be more of the blue and yellow emotes tossing the green one because it kind of looks like the green one is just jumping on a trampoline.
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Synfull Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Generally i feel this ok, but theres a few hints and tips i could suggest on it :)

Firstly, the emotes on either side could do with a little more movement. I would suggest this in 2 ways. Firstly, make the expressions move an extra pixel up and down. By keeping it at 2, it makes the movement rather jerky, but adding an extra pixel can make it seem a little more bouncy as they move in a cyclic pattern not just up/down. The second suggestion is a larger arm movement up and down. The amount moved at the second is ok, but by enhancing it could improve the overall emote.

As for the middle emote, it might be nice to add a little variation in. Maybe make him jump once and fly, jump another and forward flip, another and rotate right/left. Would take more time, but would make it less repetative. As for it at the second, you've done an ok job. One improvement is the positioning of the eyes. As he moves up, you have the eyes looking up, but as he moves down i would suggest making him look downwards. It looks a little off that he looks up, levels the eyes off and then looks up again as he's falling. By making them look down, it makes the pattern more a cycle again, and can make it seem smoother.

As for the blanket you've animated it very well. However i do notice one thing. When the emote is flapping in the air, the top edge of the blanket suddenly changes from 1 to 2 pixels. Its rather off putting and i end up focussing on it more than the actual emote.

Overeall though, its a great start. I look forward to seeing any improvements you might make. :)
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
I'll put some of those changes into action soon! :hug:
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KetsuekiRyu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a cute emote. The flailing hands are cute as is the facial expression. I think the problem lies in the tards; they just don't have the strength to get the green emote higher off the blanket.
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
;-;
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Kiss-the-Iconist Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Wheee!! xDD
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Wants a go!? :3
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Kiss-the-Iconist Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
YES!! 8DD
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
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Kiss-the-Iconist Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Whoopie!!!! xDDD
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ManiacalMuffin Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Omg cuteness~ How could you not be happy with it :noes:
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
I'm never happy with my stuff! :no: unless its my magician :<
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ManiacalMuffin Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
:petting:
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baroquebarque Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I like it, it's cute. :nod: I just keep thinking he's gonna bounce higher. :lol:
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
xD
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Gnog Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
You're not happy with it? :noes: I think it turned out really well, one of my favourites by you I think :aww:

maybe make the bouncer faster? sorry, I might be wrong as I do have a bit of an obsession with making thigs fast :eager:
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
i like its originality but thats it :(
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Gnog Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
But what's wrong with it? D:
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
i dunno :( stiff lazy animation
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Gnog Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I think the animation's good :)
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
:love:
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Serrius07 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Student General Artist
i think it turned out great :)
its also an awesome idea
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
:hug:
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Froddopsycho Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Very cool idea. :highfive:

A few suggestions: The blanket is a bit thick. I think it would look more natural if you made it a bit thinner. Also, I don't know if you were trying to make it look like he has feet when he goes down in the blanket, but there are three indents. At first I thought it was his hands but those are in the air.

All in all very cool though.
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Sinister-Starfeesh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
yeh the dent is the bump where the blankets tightened and he's landed in it :noes:
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