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[Commission] Dream Sweeper by SiMonk0 [Commission] Dream Sweeper by SiMonk0
3 of 12 commissions for :iconsamoria:

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Tool used >> Illustrator

Approx time >> ~ 2 hour

I'm loving that type of the art. They look amazing.But let's critiq this one.
I especially like how simple that looks and how cool it is XD
But the thing that hurts is no eyes,cuz they would ruin the composition.
And I have to ask,I think the part of your style is no cutiemarks,right?It's personal opinion, but I think...
Maybe you should think about doing CMs in some similiar style like the pony XD
I hope you understood what I was saying.
Have you thought about doing more shading than the show does?Like in the Rainbow Dash's work.
The hair shouldn't change,I like how it looks ^^
So,that's my opinion,I hope it is okay.
Sorry if my English sucks,I wanted to improve my skills ^^
But anyway,great work!Keep doing this! *0*
What do you think?
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Critique by Moxie-Serenity Apr 22, 2017, 2:47:28 PM
Interesting, interesting indeed

Vision - Spectacular

Originality - I've seen things similar

Technique - Very incredible, but I recommend shading

Impact - If by impact you mean astonishing, then I say woooop!!

Now what to improve on;

I recommend trying to add in eyes, I know it might be hard but it still would be nice. Also, shading would make any lineless piece go together great. Only light shading, not to, to much. Let's not forget the mane! It's incredible to be honest but it's still missing something. It great however that I can tell certain parts of the mane from the other. I applaud that !
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Setakarn Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
She's the pony who comes to clean up a nightmare xD
Samoria Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!  :)  I'm so glad I commissioned you.  I love all your work.  Thank you!
SiMonk0 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Student Interface Designer
Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1]
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