Thank you for critique! I agree with you that "the sweatshirt almost blends in to the background". And about her chin - I don't really care about it. This particular model's face, so I do not find them bad.
Oh! Thank you so much for these words! Glad you like this pic This is my little sister and I don't saw her for two years. So I couldn't left her and didn't make a photoshoot. She is my best model, because we absolutely understand each other